Maybe you portray Katniss is OOC,but thanks for finishing this good story and giving CATONISS a wonderful and sweet ending! I think all of them deserve a good ending of their lives:))

Good just a few things.. what about the trackers in their arms? Second you keep writing quite instead of quiet.

I LOVE IT! I really enjoyed reading this story!

Fantastic story.

Teaaaaaq

Oop-

I don’t like Katniss in this story. She’s a lovesick weak fool and instead has to be the damsel in distress instead of the MC of her own story. She doesn’t deserve a main role here. I’d rather have seen it from Cato’s perspective, or even Rue’s/Peeta’s. With her it’s mostly a smut piece then she’s been pregnant. I found myself scrolling past the chapters at a much too rapid pace to enjoy it. I think if you wrote your own book maybe my expectations would be different but this started out okay and finished not okay.

I really enjoy this story. Katniss is OOC but it's well written

I love the way you write Katniss. You portray her so well it feels like cannon. Nailing how she thinks and overthinks. Great fic!

Big oooff

Ok I don't know what to say but im reviewing so yay

Katniss...
Be nice to Cato! We've talked about this!
Lol idk what THAT was

Wow.
Cliffhanger much?

Haha luv how u skipped finniscks death thanks 3

GIRLLLLLLL