Is it okay if I adopt this story then, and finish it with the plot you just posted on this chapter?

this is really great. The description of Alfred's personality was spot on and the visuals were great. You can actually see him walking down the street looking out on the ocean and probably tripping a few times. I can't wait to see what happens next.
:)

I wish you had the inspiration to finish this

bits and pieces of a dream make the best stories
except for my dreams, then it's a crack fic

I am sorry to hear your will to finsh this story is gone however thank u for being honest and giving me closure I would have loved to read the chapters but it is what is I enjoyed reading your story thank you for your completed chapters I wish u the best on future works

It would have made an excellent story. While I am sad to see you leaving the fandom, I am sure whichever one you are now part of will have many great stories from you. Best of luck!

hehehe. Hello Captain Carriedo. :)

Be scared, Alfred. Be very, very scared... You belong to Captain Arthur Kirkland now.

Cannot wait. This looks AWESOME!

Nope. Never enough. I love the idea you've created. :)

You're on NaNoWriMo too?! :D

I signed up towards the end of the month so I didn't write my novel yet.

But did you finish your novel? Is it looking good?

... I know you won't for a while but: UPDATE AND FINISH! This I the most awesomest fic I've ever seen! AGGGHH!

I hope you keep at it! Can't wait for the next one.

yay i was hopeing that you would up date this it is really good

hey are going to finsh this up? it is still really good !