Reviews for Let's Pretend
shopat1695 chapter 20 . 12/2/2016
Please update the story
PLEASE READ chapter 20 . 10/15/2016
This is and AMAZING story and I hope you countinue it UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!
Shani8 chapter 20 . 11/17/2015
Jasper is getting on my last nerve. Not to mention that Draco looking to him as a partner in crime does not bode well for Harry and Hermione. :(

I know you've not updated this story in awhile, but I hope you continue it. I would love to see how Harry and Hermione deal with the obstacles in their path and emerge stronger at the end of it.

Hope you update and hopefully soon!

-Shani :)
Shani8 chapter 19 . 11/17/2015
Uh-oh... Draco showing up on the North American continent just spells trouble with a capital T. :(

I'm glad Hermione smacked him though, he totally deserved it, being the prat he is.

I look forward to more. Well done!

-Shani :)
Shani8 chapter 18 . 11/17/2015
I actually like Alex, you wrote him very well. :) I hope Harry takes his simple advice to heart too.

Looking forward to the next installment.

-Shani :)
Shani8 chapter 17 . 11/17/2015
I like the customs that you had them adopt for the new year. :)

But I'm sad that things are so angsty between Harry and Hermione now. Can't wait to see what happens next.

-Shani :)
Shani8 chapter 16 . 11/17/2015
Ok... so Harry is an idiot! :( Poor Hermione. Hope he'll come to his senses soon, before he loses her altogether.

~Shani
Shani8 chapter 15 . 11/17/2015
Aww... having Harry and Hermione falling asleep on the couch was cute. I love the nod to Castle too, which is one of my favorite shows on TV. Awesome! :)

Looking forward to seeing what happens when Hermione decides to unload her heart to Harry.

Well done!

-Shani :)
Shani8 chapter 14 . 11/17/2015
Wonderful, as always. Glad that Hermione could confide in Alaysha. :)

Great introduction of Draco Malfoy too. I get the sense that this is definitely NOT the last we've seen of him. :P

Looking forward to more.

-Shani :)
Shani8 chapter 13 . 11/17/2015
Cho is really awful, and I can't believe that Harry seems to still be carrying a torch for her. :O

Poor Hermione. Hopefully Harry will come to his senses soon, and realize that what he's been looking for, has been under his nose the whole time! ;)

I look forward to more.

-Shani :)
Shani8 chapter 12 . 11/17/2015
Cho is downright annoying. I feel bad for Hermione, and I really hope that Harry realizes that Cho is NOT the one for him, and that Hermione is. ;)

Looking forward to more.

-Shani :)
Shani8 chapter 11 . 11/17/2015
Aww... Hermione admitting she was in love with Harry was nicely executed. I can't wait to see what happens next.

This is wonderfully written and I give you major props for a job well done! :)

-Shani :)
Shani8 chapter 10 . 11/17/2015
Aww... the moment in the snow was precious. I can't wait to see how they continue to grow closer, and the pretend relationship becomes a real one... hopefully. ;)

Well done!

-Shani :)
Shani8 chapter 9 . 11/17/2015
WOW... Harry lives in a mansion, but he's still a sweet and down-to-earth guy, so it's all good. ;)

I liked the was you introduced Lily Potter too. She sounds like a doll, and I love how she took to Hermione immediately. Well done!

-Shani :)
Shani8 chapter 8 . 11/17/2015
I can't wait to see what transpires over the course of their English holiday and meeting Harry's family.

Wonderful chapter as always, I look forward to more.

-Shani :)
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