After everything she's gone through in this fic, I couldn't see Rachel living. Although the Epilogue made me cry my head off as if my mom had died, I think it was perfect, and what had to happen. It just broke my heart the way she died and... *sigh* Such a good fanfic, i'm glad I read it, although i'm going to go off and be depressed now.

This was an amazing story. I love how you wrote it, and it was nothing like I had expected. I realize it's been a while since you've completed it, but, wow. I hope you still get your reviews.

ok, as my screename suggests, i despise book 54. i am a firm believer that rachel's death was unnessecary, and i will stick to that. i sat down and read this for 45 minutes when i was exhaustingly tired, and i was honestly disappointed with the ending. i think rachel dying either way is stupid. unlike ka applegate, you at least made her death well-written and somewhat expected. i congratulate you for that. really, instead of being thoroughly disgusted, i am just a bit peeved. (at least it's not canonical)

since reviews are meant to be helpful instead of flaming, i will add that you are an excellent writer. her addiction was life-like, and you could picture her frail figure staggering through the hotel.

even though i strongly disagree with the ending of your story, i fully respect you as a writer and think you have talent. and i am very difficult to please.

Amazing! That has to be the best thing I ever read! I cna't wait to read the rest.

Damn has it been a while. Great story. Well-written. I wish I had more detailed words for you. An expert delving into the psyche of an addict and their effects on those around them. Love the framing of the Ellimist/Crayak. The one note that struck sour was the Cassie/Rachel that seemed to come out of left field for me. I felt the fic would have been stronger as a friendship/gen fic (and this is from a slash fan). Regardless, that was small enough to be ignored. Really good work, and I'm glad it was the first fic I read in full after almost half a decade out of the fandom. -Tobiasrulz

i totally agree about book 54 and by the way this was AMAZING! and i mean that truly, quite sad though! but very good!

Hoping you still read your reviews...

To be honest, I was kinda hoping Rachel would survive this fic. I think Rachel would have preferred to die a hero than to live without knowing her purpose and die of a drug overdose.

This was an amazing story. It touched me, so I couldn't very well not comment. It was very dark, and like a drama centered on Rachel's addiction rather than KAA's lighter action style. This story could have been about ANYONE living with the after-effects of a war, external or internal, and for that, it becomes all the better. My sister is going through the recovery process from an addiction right now, and through the whole relapse scenario even though she's outta the hospital. Rachel's relapses sorta remind me of my sister's, but it's my hope she'll recover in full.

Good luck in college! (and continue writing-you have a talent for it)

Oh wow. I'm so glad you finally finished this story. It's awesome..and yet so sad. It was a really great story, yeah. I hope you wright more Animorphs stories.

I absolutly love this story. The ending is perfect.

About a year ago I printed the first few pages of this. After 2 months I read it. And Went and printed the rest out. It's not my kind of story but reading it gave me 3 words: Damn Good Writing

...Wow. I don't know what else to say. I just read all of this in one sitting and I was blown away. This is one of three of the hundreds of fanfics I've read that had made me cry. This was brilliant, wonderfully written. It didn't seem fair that Rachel should die after so much, but it also seemed right. I loved it all. Right up until the very end. Especially Rachel/Cassie at the end. Fantastic. Possibly the best Animorphs fic I've ever read.

Nice, sad but nice

v. cool fic. you're good and i hope you keep writing.

thank you so much for finishing this, and what an end it was.

this is probably my favourite anific. you are an amazing writer, and i'm so glad you didn't give up on this fic.

thank you so much forlay,

for this and all your other fics

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The last reveiw I wrote was wrote in a one will be a bit longer. I think that this story was a great spin on rachel and as soon as I am done writing this I will spin the rest of the Night reading all your stories.

Aximilli422 /\ /\

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