Great Fanfic loved it

Sweet!

This is my number one favorite thing ever

I loved this story since the first moment (moment, got it?) seriously it has a great plot and I believe it is one of your best brainchildren! love ya, keep writing!

This is rlly good start writing again!

I love this! amazing job writing!

I love this story soo much.!

Aw, how cute! I love it! I didn't understand it at first, but then I did, it was awesome!

Cute.

Random, not taken seriously, I don't care, I loved it! :D

Awwwwwww! This was so cute and enjoyable! I thought that the dialogue was a little confusing, though. Sometimes it was hard to tell who was saying what. But it was awesome!

THIs is just CUTE! _ THe song playing on my Ipod kinda ruined it though.

I love this :) It's the cutest thing I've read in so long!

Hello.

I like your story. It's cute and has a happy ending, unlike your other one (don't take that the wrong way. I like that one too).

When I first saw your title, I honestly didn't like it. As of now, I'm still not too sure about it because it's a little long. I can understand why you chose it, the numbered moments you have in the story.

The originality part of it is great. I liked how you numbered the scenes, and the amount of moments there are is fantastic. They are short snippets but are very effective.

["You're kidding me."

"I kid not," she responds, grinning.

"You -"

"MISTER KABRA!"

"I signed us up to babysit."]

...I didn't really get that. Who said ["You-"] and who said ["MISTER KABRA!"]? That could have been clearer. Or maybe I'm just stupid and missed something. Yeah. Big possibility.

Also, they're not a couple throughout, right? Awesome. That makes sense. If they just fell in love like /snap! - I don't believe in the whole "love at first sight" thing.

Overall, great. Good job. :)

Keep writing.

-Golden

PS. I'm at school,. writing this. Sorry if it's a little unsubstantial.

LOVED IT! U. R. AMAZING! But I guess you already knew that! I love how you are open to criticism, so I don't feel guilty about saying stuff! k. Well, I think who said the second line in 'VI' should be made clearer. Or maybe not. Looking back at it, it does seem very obvious.. Nvm.