I just reread this one, and love it to pieces as before and again love it more. So perfectly perfect. ~b

Loved Jack in the last chapter!

Loved this story. Beautifully written.

Thank you for your enjoyable story. Many of the scenes and little moments reflected an insight into Vala & Daniel, as individuals, that I could never put into words. The way you defined what Daniel liked about her was great.
I also loved the way Daniel tried to resist admitting about the living arangements and how Vala called him on it. The way you wrote that was perfect.
I hope you are still writing SG1.

Loved this! Great work! Although slightly disappointed that it ended so soon ;)

so good so far. only complaint would be is that it seems liek the only way ppl can find to get daneil/vala, john/teyla or anyone else together is to strand them on the interglatic version of an dessert island. Me i would go crazy being stuck on some planet with no tech for who knows how long, ohh well onward to the next chapter

i liked the destiny body snatching thing that was one of the many many things i disliked about that show.

Heeeheee! Poor Jack and his lost bet! Too funny! This was a great way to wrap up this story, loved it! Thanks for writing! :)

Yea! I am so glad that Daniel finally took action and told Vala how he felt. Vala is soo good for him and they are so good for each other, this was just what I wanted. I like that Daniel realized that he too was playing games by denying his feelings. Good job! Onto the humorous epilogue... :)

Well Daniel doesn't stand a chance...offworld for three months with Vala things will get interesting. I like Terreine very much! I can picture her very clearly in my imagination and I thoroughly enjoyed the secret feast scene with her and Vala. Looking forward to the next chapter. :)

I enjoyed the first chapter very much and I love the way you planted the seeds of Daniel noticing Vala in a new light, paying attention to her hair, the brightness of her smile, getting lost in her eyes...very nice! This is shaping up to be a nice adventure here. You would think with all of Vala's past experience the team would believe her when she says she hears something. I loved Cam's "crap, crap, crappity crap"! I hope Daniel gets to Vala and the little girl before the four-legged creatures do.

Great story! I agree with jack Danny should have told him and Jacqueline is a great name ;)

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Great story. I'm glad it didn't take Daniel 3 months to reach the conclusion everyone else long ago. And I loved the epilogue. Poor Jack. :)

Loved it!

Loved the bantering with Jack ... perfect ending. So glad you shared this with all of us.