Thank you for writing beyond the DA2 story. Fenris might just be my favorite elf, it is wonderful to see happiness beyond. When he was fighting that demon with Anders, I told myself that if Anders didn't save him, I'd kick Anders all over the place later. I thoroughly enjoy the country living image that you set up for them. Fenris definitely belongs out in the open. Morrigan's appearance is something I had not expected, but it was a pleasant surprise nonetheless. One can only wonder though...is she really going to take care of the problem?

I'm happy this story isn't over yet too! With all the past action and torment last chapter, it was nice to see them settling down at home and relaxing. Love Oghren in this too.

Nice job!

It is funny how a quest similar to the ones that they had in dozens in kirkwall influenced them now, when they are a family.

What a great battle scene! The whole chapter was so wonderfully descriptive - I loved it! And oh, the suspense...

Ooh! I just bet they hated leaving the thing alive. I wonder what it is? Not a brood mother? It's probably going to come back and bite them in the ass, no? *lol* All I can say is, More! :P

I just hope all of them will get out of there in time. And I adore that rivalry friendship thing between the elf and the mage. I wish more people could see them like that

More and more interesting

Dum da dum dum...Hm, I can only wonder what it is. Here's hoping Fen will at least take some steps forward toward friendship with Anders, he's not really a bad person. Here's also hoping that Anders' seemingly empathic nature does not get him into a lot of trouble or danger. *lol*

Really good! Great suspense, descriptions and dialogue! You've got me hooked!

I really like this story line. What happens after a game story is finished is always such a mystery and then great writers like you come along and open up new worlds and adventures for us to experience. Enjoying jealous Fenris, and hope to see an update soon.

The changes look great!

Aw Fenris, I do like his possessive side. It was good to see some of the old gang together again too, and Oghren is always good for a laugh. And Sigrun is so perky, you just want to pinch her cheeks.

Nice update!