haha i liked this! well done.

God, this is perfect!

D this was lovely! I really enjoyed the way you pictured Lucius' relationship with Narcissa, and how much her proximity troubled him. Delightful!

I like the idea of Lucious getting nervous around his wife, especially during their first meetings. I've always thought that whatever they might be, they do actually love one another very much, unlike in a lot of pureblood marraiges.

I'm positive you know my thoughts on this story :D 3 (I just noticed I hadn't subscribed/favourited you. Oops)

I find this very believable and strangely canon. Lucius is favorite of mine and I love seeing him in any scenario, especially if it is with Narcissa. While it is a little sad that he cheats on her, I can't help but feel that it probably actually happened this way. After all, he is from a pure blood family where that kind of thing was normal. Anyway this was very good and I love your description of the characters! Great job :)

I like your story very much!Poor Lucius...