Dude, what the heck? This is soooo confuzzling,

It’s a good story, and extremely creative like every other fan fiction of Percy Jackson. But maybe try to make Jason a better character, ‘cause I kind of liked him.

I HATE JASON SO FRICKIN MUCH.

fuckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk you you little percabteh breaking horrrrre assssss bitch

Cool

AWWWW poor Nikki AMD Annie lol I know they hate when we call them that.

Very good

Really really really good! I love how Annabeth kisses Hades on the cheek he really dies deserve a little love! Even as a thank you!

Com on too short

Yes, Bianca and Nico are Italian. I enjoyed it. It was well executed and I will check out your poll.

Aww, that was cute :) I mean, kinda sad that he died, but cute that she went to find him. One question though: since Persephone ate the pomegranate and had to stay, what happens if Annabeth kisses a dead guy?

I would really appreciate if you make another story of this.

Except be more detailed about Percy's make it a bit more ghosts or underwotld the horrible dead and funeral where all the gods (minor ones too) give him their it had used magic and because of that he went to tartarus instead of Elyseum.100 years later (immortal Thalia,Nico,Tyson,Ella,Blackjack and Rachel) tell the story and suddenly Perc escapes Tartarus and comes back to camp.

If i could i'll write it but i'm not really good at and failed.

But its just an don't have to do it.

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Aww how sweet! Loved it! :)

This was sad but a little happier in the end so good overall story.I'm just wondering about one thing,you said in your story that Bianca was in Elysium I thought that she went for rebirth so why is she in Elysium?

That was so sweet! Awe, and yes Italian heritage :p

Awesome job! Keep up the good work!