It was admirably omg thank you! ;))
Could I take this story to translate for the Russian fanfiction site?

Gosh I need to turn the AC on, this fic was so hot I think you might have just contributed to global warming lol

the authors note at the end was great lol

That was so effing hot! Seriously, I applaud you.

My absolute favourite part of this is the A/N at the end. Much love, 2000/10.

Yeah... A bed would be nice... XD

nice Story and Pairing, interesting Experiment by Sherlock

The fic was amazing and then that AN just makes it perfect. *round of applause*

Awesomeness :)

Oh Christ, what have you done!? I don't even know what to feel now! My brain feels kind of like it's going to blue-screen on me any moment! So. effin. amazing. you have no idea. This was perfect! Just plain perfect. I... I can't even.

Favorite line: "The words 'please' and 'Sherlock' appeared to be the only ones left in his vocabulary so he compensated by repeating them over and over again."

I love the sheer dominance and possession on Sherlock's part in this piece, the darkness of John's (incredibly endearing) danger kink, the edge of this kind of play...
I'm very shy to try out this sort of play in a piece because I find it's hard to do it believably.

Also, let's be honest: if Sherlock wanted to tie me up to recreate a crime scene, I'd probably have John's reaction -only with more hormones and breasts :P

Very nicely done. I shall wait anxiously for more of your work, my dear!

Sins

I adore the last paragraph of this chapter. Just... perfectly Sherlock. and perfectly sexy.

I also like that you play with John's need for danger and excitement (I've noticed this throughout the fics you have here and may resort to stalking you on lj because you do it so well :P ) because danger is frequently all the enticement Sherlock offers John and it gets them into all kinds of trouble!

On to the next chapter!

Wow!, that was really, really good. I haven't read a John/Sherlock story in a long time and I'm so glad this was the first one I've read after all that time. You did a great job keeping John and Sherlock in-character and I loved the little bit of plot it did have. This is also one of the best porn stories I've read in a long time, good job on that too. Lots of great lines in this but I think one of my favorites was; "I see your heterosexuality is firmly out the window.", lol, love that line. Good tip in the A/N also! Great job!

Holy cow! Seriously, I am rereading this right now.

Oh, that was so hot! John tied up and Sherlock crazy for him. Whew! I need a post-fic cigarette...