YES! You have achieved awesomeness...
Legion!

Fuck. Yes.

This is so sweet!

Wow, absolutely amazing! So adorable too! Am just about to start the sequel now, lets just say that i'm glad i found this story :D also, you're a great writer - story flows really well and is perfect apart from the few typos - love it!

This is
Especially the ending
"You ate C.O"

Awww this was so cute!

Gods. BEST FAN FIC EVER

Only in the first chapter and I am crying from laughter.

Also... C.O. is the best name ever.

I would pick out every single part I like, but dammit that would take too long.

NOW TO CHAPTER TWO!

Woah, why didn't I review this when I first read it? This was just pure awesomeness with the perfect balance of funny and d'awww. Loved the ending.

Being a catlover myself (duh) I LOVE this story! It's so realistic! And C.O. basically summed up my attitude to Miranda.

Have I mentioned I love all of your fics especially mordins it left me in hysterics

"even our newborns can pick their teeth with Turian leg spurs" BWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. OMG that was inspired.

I like to think I have a good imagination, but when I read other's writings here on fanfic I see I have a long way to go.

You've built up the tension here. I'm afraid Grunt will pop the kitten into his mouth as a snack. MEOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW

I love this story! And Grunt! And kittens!

A stray cat had kittens in my neighbor's basement, and one of them has markings like a German Shepard, so my neighbor called her Shep. As soon as I met this kitten, I renamed her Commander Shepard. :D

There's another kitten that can't really walk correctly who I called Joker ;)

Dude your story is funny as hell: C.O. is AWEsome, please continue this story. By the way could you be my beta-reader for a Mass Effect story I'm working on? Please respond D

"Ah dunno! But Ah'm not goin' in there ta find oot," I DIED XD

i know kenneth has a scotish accent but that is a little extreme.

Your story was funny. You should consider continuing it.