| Reviews for sweet supernova |
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sonder this chapter 1 . 3/20/2015 This was good except for a couple of things... the last line was a bit disconcerting. Three years of silence but mostly of silent tension - the worst kind of tension.. and already, with just one kiss, she has switched her mind just like that? How did Sasuke even come to like her if, as you had implied, they had barely talked to each other (barring terse greetings) after his remorseless rejection? With how you had set up this story, I get that there were some big time-skips and you've left out a lot of things (one being how Sakura came to like Sasuke in the first place) but that's one thing I think you could have expounded upon to make his reciprocation more believable. I understand that Sasuke holds a certain power over Sakura that makes it hard for her to reject him, especially since it's quite obvious that she still holds feelings for him but I feel like there was a missing build-up to the ending because in retrospect, the last line was admittedly a nice callback to the beginning where you talked about how she lost all the things she cared about. Don't get me wrong, you can leave the last line as it is - it's just, there seems something lacking before it. It sounds abrupt when you read it out loud. |
arrearsofcivility chapter 1 . 4/9/2013 Omg why do I love this so much. |
floating on clouds above chapter 1 . 2/12/2013 Adorable! :) |
WarriorQueen124 chapter 1 . 3/28/2012 Damn. Sasuke. Whoa. Good job and keep writing!:) |
SasuSaku Forever and Ever chapter 1 . 3/25/2012 i really love your writing style! i can't wait to see what more you will write. this was really ewll done and beautiful and it flowed really well. loved it. |
renzie17 chapter 1 . 3/24/2012 Quick paced, but quite nice. I needed to read a oneshot. xD i like this story, tho. :) |
byejuno chapter 1 . 3/23/2012 this is so pretty. i like the way you write, describing without descriptive words. smooth. write more. :] |
raven rose 101 chapter 1 . 3/23/2012 Awesome! |
ILikeReading.7 chapter 1 . 3/23/2012 That was a little bit of a strange ending... but overall the story was great. |
Circle of Phoenix chapter 1 . 3/23/2012 In a way... This is kind of disturbingly... CUTE! I gotta give ya credit on this. Even if it was just a quick sit down piece, it shows something special I've not seen in many SasukexSakura pairings. Kudos. |
Crunch Berry Baroness chapter 1 . 3/23/2012 short and sweet :) but not sickly sweet its juuust the right! thanks for this little pick me up. |
MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA chapter 1 . 3/23/2012 I really liked your OOC Sakura! & the middle finger? I died. I love the Sasuke-Sakura interaction and stuff in this too. _ Niiiiiicccceeeeeeee. ~ |