Wow. Can lift three times his weight. That's impressive... or it would be if I hadn't seen Rock Lee (13) lift a GIANT-ASS tree root from the ground with a SINGLE hand; or seen a bloody, beaten, and severely exhausted Naruto (17) punch Sasuke at least 15 meters into the air with enough force that the latter still got embedded into the cliffside (implying he would've flown a lot higher and further if the stone wall hadn't stopped him), AND the equally bloody, beaten and exhausted Sasuke get up from that like nothing; or seen Suigetsu Hozuki (weaker than Zabuza), without using his muscle strengthening jutsu, slam the Executioner Blade down on Killer B with enough force to uproot several tonnes of stone, despite the latter catching the blade and absorbing most of the force; or if I hadn't seen Kurotsuchi punch the, at least, 600-pound Kinshiki through a MASSIVE tree root and he still kept flying.

Yeah, in the Narutoverse, lifting three times your own weight is genin stuff, or not even that considering even genin can jump a few times higher than the best basketball players.

Illusive man each subatomic particle of element zero is a carrier hub you should really be careful of the psychic virus that will affect your mind the things are originally was doing this to humanity was called the leviathan's we watch Star trek the Borg well the reapers are Cthulhu if it was infected by the Borg yeah be careful you should be extra extra paranoid about Helmut zero acting as that carrier hub and always remember the minute you stop listen to your conscience a little voice in your head it says why should I do that that little part of you that keeps you from doing things that you know is wrong some humans can suppress it but it never goes away the reapers use a signal to suppress that those thoughts even more effectively then we can do so whenever you're making a decision and when you're not doubting yourself not rolling the thought you had thinking it over trying to figure out the most morally right decision you can do survivors change your multiple question I have but you have in your head in your subconscious that your conscious mind chooses from be the most worse options for you and best options for them like not using element zero and develop your own technology so you can kick their ass so they can predict how far technological path you take so they can counter like an old fashioned thinking machine playing chest or checkers humanity is too unpredictable otherwise keep yourself in check and remind yourself every once in awhile to always do that finger at where you double check your thoughts and try to do the most morally right version that you can live with so you can choose the all the other multiple answers in the multiple questions she in your subconscious that the reapers are trying make you ignore.

My main problem with this other then how cannon it is which is silly is just with clones and kwarmi he shouldn’t be this pathetic this isn’t well thought out on a story because of it just leavening as middling fan fiction

Miranda’s statements in this chapter are easily dismissible laughably so in fact

The level of NERF is much more jarring now that we know naruto can punch though mountains and blast small countries.
Ill keep reading but the NERF was too big in my opinion. You could have easily made them twice as strong and the fight could have played out the same way.
That way you dont piss people off haha

Jesus did the author have to get Naruto beaten, talked down and nearly die to getting shot in the face like wtf is this! and another thing why make kurama so evil like jesus

At this point Kurama wasn't trying to get out. He and Naruto were even friendly. That is stupid, sloppy writing.

Soooo... you basically made Naruto Tank's bitch. Thank isn't even on Jonin level, let alone Sage Mode.

Sorry can read it Naruto alone can run at light speed he could Dodge any bullet and I'm gonna assume all genin can out move a bullet

Please write that ninja are (very)nerf'ed in the discription

Was wonder how a story near 400k words and averaging over 10k a chapter had so few favs and follows. The first chapter shows why. Lord have mercy.

I like this story I really do. But please plants equals flora. Animals - fauna. Thank you.

I think Naruto’s sage mode is underpowered, he should have no problem with the krogan or at least maybe a slight problem but definitely not equals

good chapter.

This chapter was as close to perfect as I’ve seen any writer get, not just on this site but even including the hundreds of published books I’ve read. I’m incredibly impressed. Alongside the impeccable structuring is a level of character and story development that some authors don’t do over the course of their whole story, let alone a single part. I’m sure the next chapter will be worth the wait, as always.