I loved this. I empathized completely with both of them.
Thank you for this!

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Great story! Love the dramatic irony!

This was too cute! I loved it!

This is GREAT!
I love it :)

So precious how show looks at the baby, and heartbreaking inthinking she will never have children.

This is SO ADORABLE! Oh my God, this and your other story There's No Forgetting, are the first Doctor Who stories I've read, and I adore them both so much! ESPECIALLY this one. I've been reluctant to delve into Doctor Who fanfiction because I wondered if anyone could really write the Eleventh Doctor with all his quirky craziness and River with all her facets...flirty and badass, broken and vulnerable, but still capable of so much love. You write these two so well that I'm both laughing and crying at this little snippet of their lives. I was doing the same thing as River at the beginning, just going "What, WHAT?" while the Doctor rambled on and made no sense to anyone except himself, lol.

Definitely looking forward to the third chapter! And if you could point me in the direction of any more River/Doctor stories like yours, I'd be eternally grateful :)

Oh this was just lovely. Thanks for writing it! :)

Wonderful! Any chance of part 3? Although the ending as it stands is pretty good...:)

He didn't kidnap babies, goodness. Although, that might be a good idea. He rather liked babies. Especially his and River's baby. He smelt nice and his skin was really soft and his heart beats were really nice to hear and he felt really warm and he was adorable and yes. Well. He liked his baby quite a lot. He needed more babies. He would have to talk to River about that. Not this River, of course. She didn't make sense. His old River. No, no, not old. She would kill him for saying that.

THIS

Oh my goodness.
I think I looove you! this is the most adorable thing I have ever read,well done :]

...he'll probably have my taste in hats and accessories and that will be lovely." D
you win the best daddy doctor award! -Makayla

That was absolutely adorable :D 3

if you wrote 50 more chapters, I would review each one! This is the best baby story I've read so far.

Very well done chapters! Looking forward to reading the rest.

I loved all the gushy and then...why do you smell of soot? Cracked me up.

This is so beautiful and touching. Poor River was so confused at first, but I'm glad she finally realised that this was her baby at some point in the future. Very adorable, and I can't wait for part 3!

THIS IS SO CUTE I CANNOT. akjshdjkahdkasjd

LOVE it! Especially how you portray young River - being unsure of the Doctor, insecure, and you showed that the brain-washing was still affecting her thinking... Yes, anyway, loved it :) Cool. Can't wait for part 3.