I'm a sucker for cute, awkward virgin fics - and I just love how serious you made Bunny about the entire thing. Gotta love the banter between the boys, too.

well DUH! ofcourse he'll be the best after ALL that practice !

x'D

Oh my. This is wonderful.

Hahaha, how very much like Bunny-chan to do all this. And man... so hot. 3

love it! ahha.. nice to see bunny practicing on kotetsu! heart it sooo much!

*speechless* ...I'll be in my bunk.
No seriously, this was one of the best lemons I've ever read. Perfect pacing and great writing!

Ah, I love it when the sex is... real. It was really interesting reading something like this from Barnaby's POV too. :) Good job, Bunny!

You, my friend, have a talent for smut. You create the scenes perfectly while keeping the characters, well, in character. This literally was perfect in every way. Awesome job.

I don't even know HOW to describe how amazing this is! You really got them both in character! I liked how Bunny didn't get it perfect every time. Totally believable and realistic. I can't tell you how much I love this! SO well written and amazingly sensual! I love seeing how Bunny learns all this, and how much Kotetsu has come to like it ;)

one more thing. I couldn't help but facepalm when Bunny said he could calculate the PSI for biting on Kotetsu's nipples XD So perfect

Oooh, that was very hot and beautifully written! Reversible is always love and it was great to see how Kotetsu-san helped Bunny get the hang of sex. I really loved this story, thank you very much!

Cheers,

- Aislin

Most fanfictions seem to ignore the fact that Barnaby is a virgin, and probably knows little-to-nothing about sex. It's very refreshing (and satisfying) to find one that goes through his learning experience. The fact that it was exceptionally well-written helps quite a bit too. I think what I liked the most was Barnaby focusing on each part of Kotetsu's body and really enjoying himself while making Kotetsu feel good.

This was amazing! The build-up was smooth, and never too fast or slow. It was steady, nothing too rushed, yet you still managed to make the smut scenes flow. It was sexy as could be, please keep up the good work.

You deserve wayyyy more reviews. That was so well done! And Barnaby seems quite in character.

JESUS CHRIST THAT WAS HOT.

I'll...I'll be in my bunk.

Well that was seriously delicious. The fic has a good flow of reading and the two of them were nicely in character. I liked the fact that you didn't divide them in the usual uke/seme-scenario like it was a law engraved in stone, too.