Reviews for The new Whirlpool Village
dheathking4821 chapter 3 . 6/26
Oh pooop this is amazing
narutoisawesome00 chapter 3 . 2/10
love it
Sabere Commander chapter 3 . 4/26/2015
Well, since you decided not to continue this I decided:
"Hey! You know what would be cool? If I continued this story, or at the very least rewrote it. That way it doesn't go on unfinished..."

So if you don't respond back with in 10 days I'm going to go ahead ad do it, Okay? Okay...
Sabere Commander chapter 2 . 4/26/2015
YAAAAAAY! I am seriously into this fanfiction!... Too bad it ends next chapter... I thought Naruto getting flung everywhere was funny as all hell, can't wait to see how the council will react to him and the U.N.S.C. Whirlpool command...
Sabere Commander chapter 1 . 4/26/2015
I'm actually looking forward to this series. It's an interesting take on crossovers too. I'm just curious, how did they end up in the Elemental Nations? Maybe have that be an upcoming arc?
yindragonkiba chapter 3 . 3/31/2015
No a cliffy when it was getting good
demonzone2571 chapter 3 . 1/29/2015
Ryuuzetsu simply because there aren't that many fanfictions with her. Also if anyone seen the Naruto Shippuden movie Blood prison she and Naruto got impaled the same way his parents did when Kurama attack konoha at the time of naruto's birth... f**k you Obito Uchiha.
Shizuka is another who I rarely see in fanfictions plus she's a good warrior that from her amazonian society.
Fu and Yugito simply because they're jinchuriki and Naruto being one himself understands their pain plus with akatsuki on the horizon jinchuriki who stand together have a better chance against the organization that hunts them like animals.
Rasha The Dark chapter 3 . 4/15/2014
Kakashi, aren't you going to have fun watch out for NOBLE.
Please continue with this story.
Rasha The Dark chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
NOBLE as ninja armed with UNSC tech nice. Just stir clear of the human sand blaster Garra Emile he will mess you up.
Zomvee chapter 1 . 3/4/2014
CHAPTER ONE (1)

This story seems a little rough to me but the idea doesn't, anywho alot of the things that take place closer to the end was the bad part cause it really didn't make much since for it to happen for that matter it really didn't make much since to have canon spirit of fire.
VenRaider chapter 3 . 2/4/2014
Seems appealing, hoping on the continuation of this series.
hellfire45 chapter 3 . 1/2/2014
Good make moree chapters
Michael Bourne chapter 3 . 9/30/2013
nice
Ranmaleopard chapter 3 . 9/4/2013
i think you should add Anko Mitarashi to the harem b/c like naruto she was made outcast by the civilians, has an unwanted seal on their bodies, loves to mess with people and their heads, and have been betrayed by the village
ThePizziaMan chapter 3 . 7/3/2013
Hope u update soon:)
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