I like how the broken sentences reflect the tangle inside the Doctor's mind. This one is very good.

That is so beautiful

I want to hold his hands. Both of them at the same time.

This as beautiful. I've got chillbumps so bad that they hurt. Just beautiful. I'm at a loss for words.

The TARDIS's perspective, right? I love how your stories are more like prose poems.

haunting and beautifully written...such a powerful and emotional story. great work :)

This made me want to laugh and cry and... so beautiful. Gosh I wish I could write like this ;) You have an amazing gift. I just LOVED the idea of that scar and that freckle...and this was all simply wonderful. It felt very ... I don't know if intimate is the right word, but I think it's what I'm shooting for. I mean, it felt very deep in the Doctor. It made me want to get to know him better. Or it made me envy the one(s) who know him this well. Who know about his hands.

Anyway, I don't really know what I'm talking about, because, as usual, I have to read your stuff more than once, and even then I'm not ENTIRELY sure of everything that's going on (in a good way).

I love this! I love the fact that there's parts of him which carry over physically, and they're passed down too. I liked the ending the most, because it's a bit of both :D Are you going to make it longer? (Because I hope so!)