| Reviews for Senior Year |
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piningspaceboys chapter 6 . 8/12/2015 FLORIDA, HAWAII, HATI, CUBA, THE BAHAMA'S, SHIT LIKE THAT. |
piningspaceboys chapter 3 . 8/12/2015 good story |
zoxy2 chapter 8 . 2/28/2015 Aw happy ending :) And just for the record Maka should totally be with Soul! -Zoxy |
love this book chapter 7 . 12/18/2014 Write more |
Biv303 chapter 7 . 8/31/2014 Please continue this. It's awesome. |
LanieBaLanie chapter 7 . 8/31/2014 I love this chapter update soon! PLEASE |
Pure-Hazard chapter 7 . 8/31/2014 Awesome awesome awesome! Please update soon! |
maximumrain chapter 7 . 8/30/2014 Update soon! :) |
Melodyzorr chapter 6 . 9/22/2013 How dare you leave me with all these mixed emotions and just stop writing! - breaks down in sobs - |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2012 good jod |
maximumrain chapter 6 . 9/1/2012 I would like to go to Hawaii or visit the china wall...but anyways...UPDATE SOON! |
Nikki chapter 3 . 6/27/2012 My window. And good story so far |
MPHknows chapter 6 . 6/6/2012 Venice, Italy, or Cancun, Mexico. MPHknows |
ForeverUnknown chapter 5 . 5/27/2012 u said it would be 8 days till u updated and its been 9 days T_T...oh well i guess ur busy |
MPHknows chapter 5 . 5/25/2012 Great story... Try more detail though. Remember: A good author makes the reader hear what they hear, see what they see, and feel what they feel. Also, try not to be so cliche. I know the whole Lissa thing is good to get a story going and to start a conflict, but it's used so much that its just not interesting anymore... A good way to use a cliche without being cliche about it is to just simply stick something in that's never happened before... but make sure it makes sense... MPHknows |