what happens next? great so far!

Please please continue this story, I love it

I know it's been a long time but I just want to know what is going to happen. The story is great, please finish it (Pussinbutts eyes) pleeeaaasse?

Please finish this.

Oh S- Bringing Mildred there!? Glad to see this on my screen again. Lovely imagery with Agatha & co mirroring Amelia and Co. Your still the queen of cliffhangers.

Ooo I love it! Fab job DP. Hope you update soon!

Oooh fab chapter (as was the previous)

Can't wait for the final chapter to see what goes down, and what Broomhead has in store for poor Constance (and Mildred since she's also caught up in things) Hope Egbert can get there in time.

Broomhead was perfectly in character and she spoke so evilly.

Love this line.

{The spider was hungry for souls, thirsty for power and just like a spider, Hecketty gained satisfaction of witnessing her pray, condemned to exhaust themselves before the realisation of their fate was realised, too late. Those poor unfortunate souls, rendered powerless when she secretly wanted a match, someone to at least test her, push her to her limits.}

Can't wait for the finale

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Wow, this is interesting :) I'm really curious about what's going to happen next. I love how you write Hecketty, you really capture her sadistic nature.

Broomhead is so evil! *shakes fist* every word that you wrote for her dialogue made me shiver. Poor Constance, I really hope that she doesn't get too hurt throughout and Mildred, I really felt bad for her. Being locked up cold and isolated without anyone's reassurance and with no knowledge about Miss Hardbroom's whereabouts or current condition would only add to the anxiety. Great chapter, I look forward to reading the next)

Ooooooh both chapter 6 and this one were brill!

Poor HB trapped in Heckitty's clutches, love this line:

{Her never ending and relentless pursuit, the quest for perfection and those cold, emotionless eyes now trapped and entangled in her talons. She would never be able to escape not this time.}

Agatha's power seems like its going to be a force to be reckoned with. And was Amelia's dream some-what of a premonition of things to come?

Ah, the intrigue ...

Princess S

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Eeek, what a chapter!

Agatha's new powers sounds like they're going to be a force to be reckoned with, but the scene with Amelia was particularly well described, you can really feel her despair at what is going on around her, coupled with her worry for Constance's safety. Great update, I can't wait for more!

Brilliant, I can't wait to see what happens next. Poor Amelia, she's so torn between what she wants to do and what she needs to do nd you captured it perfectly. Great job, as always :)

Ooh she is horrible! Gripping stuff

Awesome chapter! You seriously take suspense and mystery to a new level. I have no idea what those two are planning but know its not going to be good. Poor Constance, stuck between the two of them and with no idea about Mildred's whereabouts, terrifying. Can't wait to see where you take this story next, brilliant!

Ooh, another chapter filled with suspense and intrigue! I loved the interactions between BH and Agatha and their pact to each other, very clever idea and *shudders* the evil tag team returns!

Great stuff, can't wait to see where you take this :)