Ohhhsuch a loving story! i am indeed "cured"by their immense love! yes, there will always be some temporary ebbs in their long long journey,but the waves will finally come back to the shore,the home,they will be immortal!

Phai's letter made me smile.

What an amazing love letter and what a lovely analogy, wave and shore, the wave changes but it always returns to the shore, just like Alexander and his Phai.

I am truly touched by their love and your wonderful writing.

Hua

Dear PhaiFan,

I have read all your Alexander/Phai stories recently (since they are not very long and very easy to read LOL) and enjoy all of them.

This story is one of my favorite, about their separations, their busy schedules keeping them apart even when they are together, and how their love overcomes all the difficulties. I am very touched and moved by the story.

I heard you are a mother and I am a mother to a 9-year-old boy. Do you have a Facebook account? Please PM me and I would like to add you as a friend.

Hua

That's such a nice analogy to them; I totally agree!

Wow, they are like the tide! I LOVE how they are always drawn to one another

This chapter killed me...so excited and you're so damned good writer.

I like your fanf cause they're not too long or short and write is fluide. The story captured the hearth and mind of reader, it's not easy to do it. Congrats! _

Sorry for my bad english :/ xoxoxo

'They had their whole lives ahead of them.'

Question on the timeline of your story, this is after the march through the desert before Ectaba right?

hi

i had to say i've been reading this and i really like it..sorry for not leaving reviews before u-u i really am sorry

:D i love it, the way you descrive their love *-*

it makes me feel like a girl in love -/-

the way they make love is so in love *v* i really really like it!

well i like your writing have to say it

can wait for them to be together again n.n they deserve it

and ptolemy thanks for the push for that kiss

i liek that alexander leves marks on hephaestion thay way everybody knows who he belongs to *o*

i'll be waiting for the next chap

take care n.n and thanks for writing :D

Oh my, oh my...phaifan words fail me! This was mind blowing! Alex's letter, phai's seductive dinner..their lovemaking... everything was so achingly beautiful, sweet, hot, tender, moving...you turned me into a mushball!

Hot and spicy. Nicely done.

'you are my greatest treasure of all. If I had to choose between you and everything else I have, I would choose you.'

*melts into a gooey puddle*

Great chapter! Love Hephaistion's command to the guards about not being disturbed. ;)

OMG! what a steamy chapter! the description of their lovemaking was hot and cute at the same time and their words of love for each were marvelous!

hope Alexander keeps his promise this time!

I must insist on your sending Hephaistion to me. Otherwise I may have to take more severe steps such as kidnapping... :D Alexander is also requested.

I love the build up of anticipation with this chapter - esp. Hephaistion's little note to Alexander that states unless the whole of Asia is burning they are not to be disturbed. Again, Alexander is dissolving into a mushball, but I can see how hard it is for him to do otherwise! :D

Can you please send Hephaistion to my house when he has a moment? I would really love to have him for dinner. YUM!