You know if you make this into a series, I'll really love to read it :)

I hope you make a sequel i like this chapter

Awww, I REALLY wanted to know what would happen next...

It was really interesting, but the ending is more of a cliffhanger. I really want to know how he gets out of this. Yeah...

Personally, I think one-shots are supposed to tie everything up at the end of it, not leave it open ended. I can understand why you wouldn't like the rest of it and why you may not finish this, but it's a nice one-shot. :)

Oh. this is brilliant.
No continuation? Oh, well, that means more delighþful possibilities for me.

Update please

I really enjoyed this! I WOULD LOVE TO READ THE NEXT PARTS SO FEEL FREE TO POST IT!

Very interesting. I would have liked to see how this plays out, but I greatly respect your decision to knowingly stop and to tell us about it.

Very well written. I really enjoyed the whole plot, but, well... Backstory? Please? That is the one thing I find unsatisfactory about some of your stories. There isn't enough background for me. I'm probably in the minority here, but it still bothers me.

This will be...perfect.

Boo! I want this continued so badly...*sigh* Ah well. I do love it, keep up the good writing.

It is pretty easy to intuit what happens next. This is definitely nicely put together, even if only to the point where we guess at the rest. Thank you for posting this!

I think you're wrong and this is good. Thanks for posting it.

This is really good, and I wish you were continuing it, but it's still great as a oneshot. Keep up the good work! :D

WHY? I know you asked me not to but PLEASE can you continue it, it's just amazing and I really want to read more *puppy eyes* pweese!