This was lovely

maixaang? this is something i've never seen before. again, i don't love the ship, but the writing style is beautiful, so i think i love this anyway :)

kat xx

*Sigh* FINE. Because you did such an excellent job on this beautiful fanfic, I will stop calling Mai/Aang _Mange_. Keep up the great work :)

This is like the fourth Aang/Mai fic I've read on this site. I'm liking it more and more each time I read one. Your fic highlights a few ideas of why I'm drawn to reading about them together, to see if it would work. Well done.

This is my second time reading a 50 sentence-challenge or something of that nature; and I'm surprised to say I like them, a lot. I may try one of these myself.

This is an unconventional pairing, but the way you write about it, it seems to make sense. #16 Need makes a good point: Mai hates boredom, but life with Aang is never boring!

My favorites were #6 Gentle, #18 Attention, #24 Now, #37 Time. #19 Soul was also interesting.

I thought #4 Last and #8 Thousand were most in-character for Mai; I can see her getting fed up and wanting to prove everyone wrong.

Good job with this. Keep writing!

They do make an interesting couple, don't they?

This was fantastic! There were a few spelling errors-Besides that, it was amazing! Your writing style has a kind of elegant feel to it, yet it's not too wordy or anything. I'll make sure to check out some of your other works :)