Oh wow. This story is hot and yummy. Your writing is so descriptive that you can feel the emotions of these two bursting through. Loved it!

This is great :)

Really great one shot. Nicely written and with some serious steam between those two. Gotta love that.
Nice job : )

i think hot is not the good word to describe your text, burning perhaps ? Very good fanfic. Thank you

Cute! And hot! And altogether lovely. I loved all the small interactions between the two of them that made this so much more than just PWP. Great job!

YAY for SHEGA! I really think they should have made him a RI. I love him to pieces! :3

I would def like to see you do more with the pairing. I very much enjoyed this bit and while I'm a tried and true Garrusgirl at heart, I would definitely have given it up for a Vega play at least once.

And I really enjoyed your writing. You paint a very believable picture with an easy read.

I enjoyed this very much so. It was sexy but not to the point where you made it awkward, I hate writers that do that. xD I was very disappionted that this didn't become a legit pairing in the game because most of the people you can romance are pretty lame. (I kind of hate Kaiden and Jacob) Well done, I liked it. Oh and the part where he gave her his dog tags was friking adorable. :3 It was kind of like giving a piece of his idenity to her,loved it. Good job. :)

Like Abstract said, would love more of you about Vega/femshep ! Maybe another story or the first time sex in the docking bay ? Oh please 3

That was all sorts of sexy. Very well written. I also greatly enjoyed the casual flirting between Shepard and Vega, why oh why couldn't he be a full romance option?

I love the teasing in this, it was all very vivid. Great work. :)

Oh. my. gawd.

Now I wish Vega could be an LI. I enjoyed the flirting, but I'm usually a Garrus girl. Even still, hot damn.

Nicely done, and kudos on the rare but tasteful (slightly humorous) safe sex mention. Artfully worked in with the background plot, end of the world and all that.

Was seriously pissed that I couldn't have Vega in the game, please do more on this. Excellent work. One crit - I can't see Shep moaning and giggling like that, not so much anyway.

Would love to read about the hinted-at scene in the cargo bay!

Holy FUCK! After reading this...I think I need a cigarette. In an awesomely kickass way!

Please hold while I bow down to you and your otherworldly writing skills and your ability to have Vega in character AND ridiculously sexy. If he had been a romance option (which I STILL don't understand why the hell he isn't) I imagine their love scene would go something like this. Oh, sweet baby Jesus, PLEASE let it go something like this!

I don't know if you've written anything else about Mr. Vega and F!Shep like this but I'm damn well going to check! Lol this is just...SOOOOOO GOOD! I've literally read this damn thing 4 times. Get's better with every read!

Hizzzaa!

My god! Wonderful. Gotta love James!

Buh. I. Uh. FFFFFFFFF.

That. Oh, jesus. I'm just going to... be in my bunk. AJSJDKA.

Seriously, the dynamic and the heat and situation and oh lord it was just so perfectly amazingly done that I'm practically tongue tied trying to describe my feels. Bravo, serah, bravo 3