Reviews for Better
Ellie chapter 28 . 9/15
Been waiting a long time for this update I hope not all is lost amazing fic btw
Moe Latignant chapter 2 . 8/28
Is it just me, or are the principal gala from Victorious magnets for Fan fiction male fantasies?
Shadowgreydarkray chapter 28 . 6/6
This story is amazing so far. I hope one day you come back and add to it.
warrior-of-water chapter 28 . 1/14
I really enjoyed this so much! I really want to see what happens next, and I hope you update soon
Ivory8817 chapter 28 . 12/2/2019
Please don't abandon this fic I've been waiting for an update since 2015
xHelgaSinclairx chapter 28 . 11/29/2019
Damn, I'm fangirling so hard over this. Keep up the great work!
jori-belliceIsMyLife chapter 27 . 4/18/2019
Sigh... Abandoned right when it's getting to the best part. I hope you're well, and if you ever decide to write for this again you'd have many anxious readers
warren chapter 20 . 3/30/2019
Look stories like these on a jori ship are pretty good but when either Tori or Jade hesitate in a chapter like this it fucks up the story and makes it too damn slow.
I get why to a certain extent but for this particular fic u could speed up a little in certain places. Hell sometimes just adding more, wether that be fluff or humor or even horror.
One of u guys or gals started a story where Tori and Jade were not only a really cool couple but were twisted serial killers as well. That story needs waaayyy more chapter work cuz the first one or two was quite impressive to me, but like I said more work. Keep it coming. Not trying to flame anyone btw. Just strong suggestions is all. Good day.
Nichol989 chapter 28 . 1/30/2019
please continue to right this story sometime soon because I one hundred percent love this story
Guest chapter 28 . 12/31/2018
This story is, amazing
I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Guest chapter 28 . 11/18/2018
And here lies another Jori story doomed to the unfinished graveyard. 3 years since the last update is a pretty good sign that its over me thinks. Are these things cursed or something? Because no other fandom or ship Ive ever obsessed over has ever had soooo many fanfics…just not finished. Incomplete never to be heard from again. I dont wanna sound like a total douche or anything so I’ll make sure not to forget to say that I absolutely loved what did manage to get wrote. Thanks for this sweet ass story I dug the hell out of it
Alyisa chapter 28 . 9/25/2018
I hope you'll update again soon. This was one of my favorite stories
Guest chapter 28 . 7/23/2018
Amazing story, loved it!
Croatiangirl1997 chapter 28 . 6/25/2018
I love this...if you gonna do an update soon I will welcome it with both hands...this is probably the best thing I've ever read...Kudos
Mr. Inhibitor chapter 28 . 5/10/2018
Well, that was a pretty good ride. It's a bummer that a lot of lesbian teacher/student fanfics that I encounter on here aren't finished though as many of them are quite entertaining and yours is the best that I've read so far. (I knew this wasn't finished when I started reading it).

It was a lot of fun seeing these two play off each other, tease each other and how they both end up thinking "this shouldn't happen, but it's happening". And the inclusion of the others was nice (although Beck being gay felt rushed, and since we don't see much of Andre it's tough to get a feel on him).

But it is a bummer that this isn't finished as it's not too far from being finished: you have to wrap up getting Tori back home, how she and Jade respond to that incident later, use Andre a little more and advance/finish the play arc. So like four or five more chapters... But as someone who has tried to put fictional ideas in print before, I know how it feel to just loose the flow.

Although the interesting thing is had you not included the play arc, you actually could've finished the story on this chapter I think. All it would've taken is Tori pulling Jade aside and openly admitting her feelings beyond "yeah" and they agree to see it through once Jade graduates. I sometimes make beta's of unfinished fanfics that I think can be "saved" and I'm thinking that's what I'll do with this. No I'm not stealing it, I'm finishing it for my own personal records. No one will see anything but me.
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