This is exceptionally well written. Your language is absolutely gripping, and not to mention beautiful. Also, bravo on the plot concept. There are only a handful of time travel fics written for Gundam Seed, and none of those attempted to bring back both Kira and Athrun. I really want to see them meet and realize that they are both from the future. That scene just seems to hold so much potential. I hope you decide to continue this one day. If not, I still really enjoyed it for what you have so far. Thank you :)

Four months before the colony exploded? But last chapter you said Athrun was six months before graduation; did they land in different places of time?

Please update this story I would really like to know what would they do next with there knowledge of the future and how they would change it

Good chapter
Please continue.

Good intro.

Oh gods I wish this would be updated...so much potential.

Will you make it keep running? I love the story, I want to know everything else that will happen.

Please please pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssseeeeeeee finish the story. It's been good so far and has so much potential!

Hey,
I hope you update soon, its a great story so far and better than most SEED time travel stories (not that there are a lot). Can't wait to read more if you decide to write more.

coooooooooool

Update pleeeeeeeeaseeeeeee

This looks interesting so far, I hope you plan to continue it soon :)

Here I was perusing my favorites and I was absolutely stunned to see this had updated. Congratulations for continuing after so long! It's good to see this story again.

I love the way you characterized Kira and Athrun. The haunted soldier is a much more interesting perspective than Rewind Time HAX, and much more realistic. That's among the many things Seed Destiny did wrong - they forgot to weigh in the psychological damages of war and ended up with Jesus Yamato.

May I be so rude as to offer a suggestion? It's more of a personal pet peeve, but I am not fond of referring to characters by their eyes or hair color. It's rather impersonal, overused, and takes the place of other descriptions for the character. There's nothing wrong with using a character's name more.

Keep up the good work!

Nice to see this return. Looks like our heroes are finding their resolve. Can't wait to see what happens next.

I starting to like this story. Hoping to see more chapter soon.

I don't usually read these "back to the past" stories but this is actually really good. You put emphasis on their reaction anf written it well. Can't wait for the nextchapter. Keep it up