Rebel Flight Controller: (Over the radio) What's your call sign, pilot?
Bodhi Rook: Um...
Jyn Erso: We have to go.
Bodhi Rook: It's, um...
Jyn Erso: Say something. Come on.
Bodhi Rook: Rogue. Rogue One.
Rebel Flight Controller: Rogue One? There is no Rogue One!
K-2SO: Well, there is now.
Bohdi Rook: Rogue One, pulling away.
K-2SO: Pulling away.

Jack: (Frantically tries to break the chains) Bugger, bugger, bugger, bugger, bugger. (There is a groaning underfoot, the Kraken is coming; Jack gets innovative and reaches for a lantern with his sword, breaks it and pours the oil over his chained wrist enabling him to slip it out of the shackle) C’mon. C’mon, that’s it. Ah. (He slips free just as the tentacles of the Kraken rise over the ship, it’s mouth opening wide in a roar, splattering Jack with its saliva and also spitting out his lost hat) Not so bad. (Wipes the saliva off his face) Oh. (Bends down to pick up his hat, puts it on) Hello, beastie. (Takes out his sword and charges at it heroically as it swallows him up and then takes down the Pearl in a tight embrace; the Crew on the long boat watch quietly and Davy Jones watches through his telescope)
Davy Jones: Jack Sparrow, our debt is settled.
Palifico: Captain goes down with his ship.
Maccus: Turns out not even Jack Sparrow can best the devil.
Davy Jones: Open the chest. Open the chest, I need to see it! (The chest is opened and there is nothing inside) Damn you, Jack Sparrooooow!

They wouldn't all be clones you know. Half of the clones who survived episode 3 are either retired, dead, or in management positions because of their physical age. So maybe a quarter of them are clones. The rest would be regular beings. The reason I did not say humans is because the empire would occasionally accept aliens into the imperial academy.

Uh they are called buns.

Black Star? Don't you mean Death Star?

Yeah, this might be kind of late. But I love this story!

love it!

:)

You completely gave away that Tani's master is Qui-gon Jinn. It's a cool idea though

Funny last line, just imagne her face at that..Loved it! Gonna read the sequel!

I knew it would be one of Padme's handmaidens, I didn't think it would be Eirtaé, I thought it would be Sabe or someone but good job!

Awww Poor Obi! and poor Tani..

Cliffhanger...;\ :D

Who is Tani's mother?!

I loved this! I have read a few star wars ffs, but some of them are just... stupid. But I really liked this! Strong plot, and good character build! Good Job! On to the sequel for me!