Reviews for Some Things Just Don't Work Out |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Benedict Cumberpatch? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am LOVING this story so far, can't wait to finish reading it |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing!~ |
![]() ![]() Congrats, you are such an awesome writer and this is such an awesome story, that this is the first fanfiction I have ever reread and within 4 days since the first time at that! Be proud! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, this is really funny, interesting, exciting and well written. I really enjoyed reading it. Well done. You did a really great job at writing. Please keep writing like this, it is really great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought it was strange that you said calling it a couch was a British thing because I'm American and everyone I know calls it a couch. Now, however, I see that you called the parking lot a car park and I realized you are probably British aren't you |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was completely awesome (again) :D I absolutely love it! Just one question...why did jones leave '6? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really loved this fic :) I love the unique way you have captured Alex's personality and his character :D I know he was created by Horowitz but you have really made hi your own :D Congrats |
![]() ![]() I want a story where NCIS comes to stay with Alex in England! That would be awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really really giving hints to the s equals name now really |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still brilliant. Have read the first 5 of these Alex rider fanfics today and have no intention of stopping yet :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh! This story was fantastic! I loved how you made the title the last words. Some things just don't work out. Bravo. You are an amazing author with some real potential. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would never have guessed you were bullshitting the stuff with the computers. It seemed professional enough to me - although I know absolutely zero about hacking. I guess if you put in enough detail and make it sound really complicated, you can get anyone to believe anything! Loving the story so far...but the grammar is still annoying me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting opening chapter. My only criticism would be the grammar. Apostrophes are used to signify ownership or whata-ya-call-ems...contractions? Yeah, that sounds about right. It's just a bit distracting to be reading through a really good story and then finding a random apostrophe sitting in the middle of a sentence. Sorry. :) |
![]() ![]() U did are really fantastic job with this story! I'm sooooooooo happy I read it :-). Thanks for writing! |