Reviews for Some Things Just Don't Work Out
HRTG1027 chapter 8 . 5/29/2018
Benedict Cumberpatch?
SilentHeartedOnes chapter 1 . 12/5/2017
I am LOVING this story so far, can't wait to finish reading it
YokaiAngel chapter 17 . 11/18/2017
amazing!~
Guest chapter 16 . 9/11/2016
Congrats, you are such an awesome writer and this is such an awesome story, that this is the first fanfiction I have ever reread and within 4 days since the first time at that! Be proud!
M-chanchen chapter 17 . 3/30/2016
Hi,
this is really funny, interesting, exciting and well written. I really enjoyed reading it. Well done. You did a really great job at writing. Please keep writing like this, it is really great.
ArthurianScribe chapter 5 . 3/15/2016
I thought it was strange that you said calling it a couch was a British thing because I'm American and everyone I know calls it a couch. Now, however, I see that you called the parking lot a car park and I realized you are probably British aren't you
dorfchaosgenie chapter 17 . 1/31/2016
This was completely awesome (again) :D I absolutely love it!
Just one question...why did jones leave '6?
Skendo chapter 17 . 10/30/2014
Really loved this fic :) I love the unique way you have captured Alex's personality and his character :D I know he was created by Horowitz but you have really made hi your own :D Congrats
Anon chapter 17 . 8/14/2014
I want a story where NCIS comes to stay with Alex in England!
That would be awesome.
codybob chapter 16 . 7/29/2014
Really really giving hints to the s equals name now really
InArduisFidelis-RAMC chapter 17 . 6/22/2014
Still brilliant. Have read the first 5 of these Alex rider fanfics today and have no intention of stopping yet :)
The Inverse Universe chapter 17 . 4/13/2013
Oh my gosh! This story was fantastic! I loved how you made the title the last words. Some things just don't work out. Bravo. You are an amazing author with some real potential.
slumberingscribe chapter 5 . 2/19/2013
I would never have guessed you were bullshitting the stuff with the computers. It seemed professional enough to me - although I know absolutely zero about hacking. I guess if you put in enough detail and make it sound really complicated, you can get anyone to believe anything!
Loving the story so far...but the grammar is still annoying me.
slumberingscribe chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
Very interesting opening chapter. My only criticism would be the grammar. Apostrophes are used to signify ownership or whata-ya-call-ems...contractions? Yeah, that sounds about right. It's just a bit distracting to be reading through a really good story and then finding a random apostrophe sitting in the middle of a sentence. Sorry. :)
a person chapter 16 . 10/5/2012
U did are really fantastic job with this story! I'm sooooooooo happy I read it :-). Thanks for writing!
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