Wow! Very good.

I have not words to describe how I enjoy this story! Really you let me with want to read more! I loved how you describe the atmosphere and how Optimus, with not memmories of who he was give this story a great detail and how he must survive in a unknown planet. I like how you use the thermal vision with Prime, you remind me of Predator when he is using his thermal mask X3. And when his vision was repaired, he only saw in white and black like a dog... Poor, Optimus he suffer a lot of time and worst when he discover what Alpha Trion was doing (he is one of my favorite characters too X3).

I give you a BIG 10 for you dedication and give you a great congratulations for this story and I hope you get motivated to made a sequel. I really, really love this story! w

Nice, it feels like you are referencing a little to your other story "First Job". It would be nice if you continued your end note. But otherwise nice work.

What happened to Imlee? D:

Excellent story.

sequal? :D I wanna know what happen next O.o

Wow that was an amazing read and so in depth and insightful the way you set every up. The world the people it was wonderful. I especially love the ending with Alpha Trion not being able to twist things around to get his way as he clearly is used to.

Again wonderful story it was a delight to read.