MORE! this is amazing shiz :')

GUMBALL AND MARCELINE! Oh that makes me laugh hard. It's just funny because on my profile I said they were one of my favorite couples because it could never happen. It has!

Hey you should do something like the Legendary Demons attack, and the vampires, Finn, Fionna, possibly PB and PG, could be in battle with them, you choose the outcome.

Aww I can see why Fionna would think that 'Behind my smile is a hurting heart Behind my laugh I'm falling apart look closely at me and you will see the girl I am isn't me.'

Or 'Dont say you know me, When I dont know myself'

Its one of those chubbie calls.. -_- It sucks if your fat.. But when you get skinny then everyone would gasp at the beautiful girl not knowing who she is once they know who she is and ask her out.. She will reject them.. Because they called her ugly.. They called her fattie the beautiful ice queen knows better to date a jerk

Continue! I want to read more! :D

hm...So fionna met finn, and this is very confusing..

I LOVE THE STORY! I can't believe it has so few reviews! It's really good and I love the whole thing! You make the characters seem so real! And as the last battle you should have the vampire/demon kidnap Marceline and have her freak out. Feel free to use that!

just dont let them die!

UGH, I KNOW, FINALS!

...Good chapter, by the way! :D

continue! Sorry for not reviewing in a while! Had my iTouch stolen and that's where I used to review and read! Contnue! It got better!

This is wacked, but I really like it.