Great "first" chapter. I loved the ending, with its clear reference to the first Episode of Series 1. Can't wait to read the next. I love the background you've given Merlin, and your descriptions of his inner thoughts.

Interesting. This sound good.

I am so psyched to find out what happens. I love you're take on a modern day dragons lair. Update soon

This is very suspenseful, and I'm curious to see what's going to happen next. Very atmospheric and otherworldly. Nice! Please update soon. :)

Curious and waiting for more...like it so far...gr

Really sets for an interesting story. Can't wait for more...thx...gr

... Please? Update? Maybe? Please?

Best wishes!

This sounds interesting. I'm interested to see where you go with this. Update soon.

Oh! This sounds delicous. I love those stories that never seem to end