So so so much unnecessary details, too much if you ask me. Could of kept it shorter.

Minato's soul is inside the belly of the reaper, the soul cant return back

Im a little late to comment but that was an awesome read

I took Japanese. The words are written as Sensei and Jōnin. Pronounced as sehn-say, and jou-neen. I'm not bashing on your writing, it actually seems pretty good so far, but you can easily look up the correct written form using any Naruto related search. You can even look up the Hiragana. The vowels A, I, E, O, U are the first line. Pronunciation for those is ah, ee, eh, oh, oo.

Noooooo Naruhina nooooooooop. Please noo

Hi! I think that the writing and the flow of this story are amazing, something that I've never seen before! I'm so excited for the next chapter to come out!

six years and still no update...

yo... yo said there will be an update, i have yet to see one and i have already read this story 3 times...

Is it normal to smile so much while reading something... fuck that my mouth couldn't stop itself from doing so. Nice plot going on here :)

I just realized this...Kakashi...is older..than Minato...hHhhhHhhHmmMMmmMmmMm...

will you going to continue the story?

after i search a few story, i admit i really love yours. but it's been a long time since the last update soo.. okay thankyou for writing this

Tal vez sea la única persona que hable en español aquí, pero dejaré mi opinión. Esta historia me encanta, está muy bien llevada y es interesante. Me encantó esas pocas interacciones entre Minato y Shizune, me arriesgo a pensar que si la historia seguía esos dos tendrían un desarrollo romántico.

Es una VERDADERA lástima que el autor no haya continuado, tendrá sus motivos y se le entiende. Pero lo digo en serio, me hubiese encantado seguir leyendo más de esto y ver si se volvía realidad mi pensamiento sobre Minato y Shizune :(

I would like to read more of this story but it doesn't seem like it's being continued

Since we're approaching 6 years without a new chapter or profile update, I'm well to assume that this story has been completely abandoned, and you're moved on; either from this handle or from writing fan fiction entirely. I accept that like Chaucer's Canterbury Tales, this story will remain unfinished; and I understand, Naruto has concluded, even if a few years ago you were ready to continue, the shifting sands of canon might very well have buried whole plots and already written sections. You moved to pastures new. At least that is my fervent hope; the messages on your profile suggested an update was forthcoming along with an explanation - and there in a reason - for the delay, and the wording, to me, seem to indicate at least some tone of slight alarm or haste, elucidating that some kind of unpleasantness or malfact was behind the interruption. Because of this I have a slight tinge of unassuageable worry in the back of my mind, that something drastic or terrible could have happened, something which I and other readers would forever remain ignorant to, without recourse of hope of any revelation of what might have transpired. I don't expect any response to this missive, indeed the futile nature of it has occurred to me as I write it; that I am essentially querying into nothingness, writing an electronic message in a bottle to be cast into the digital void, where it may remain for likely longer than I myself will continue to live. Ultimately, I just want to thank you for the story, great as it is even unfinished, to express my gratitude for it and my concern about you're state of welfare given the abruptness of it's abandonment, and to wish and hope that you simply tired of it and moved to greener fields, new journeys and life experiences and are doing well wherever you are and whatever you are doing.
Sincerely,
-Johannes, The Egg Emperor