Thanks for such a great happy ending. Though we know from the show, this isn't what happened to Jessica unfortunately, it was nice to dream throughout the story.

Thank you for creating a suspenseful and intricate world in which Reese can find a bit of happiness at the end. Well done.

I really liked your Finch POV-his envious reflections on living ghosts, his preparations for the possible bad outcomes. While I like having a happy ending (certainly more of one than the show is going to give us), I think that his wariness is justified, considering all that could happen. But it's lovely to see a brief moment of happiness for John and Jessica anyway.

Great ending! I think the pacing and point of view in this story was fine. I really enjoyed reading it and the happy ending. Thanks for writing it and sharing it with all us readers!

I really like your descriptions; more like painting with words. Your use of tense - Simple Present?- was different. I don't believe I've read anything written that way and I don't know that I really got used to it. Probably just me, though. Please keep writing.

Beautifully done! I'm glad they did find a little peace here in this AU.

Ooh, so Snow has some scheming of his own, beyond merely appearing slimy. Interesting!

Hopefully Snow will recognize that he had better not mess with Finch, who can be just as lethal as Reese in his own inimicable way! He can take people apart electronically!

Great chapter!

Finally! Hopefully now that Reese has opened up to Jessica and he can see that she hasn't rejected him, he will accept the love that he doesn't feel he deserves anymore.

Aaaaaaaah, this is what I've wanted from the show. Something that tells me how Reese let himself get pulled into the CIA and into the job of assassin. I really liked this, although OUCH.

This was a fantastic chapter! I could totally see this being John's background...and you wrote it well.

This chapter works well to round out Jessica's personality. I'm glad she's not just letting things go unspoken; it would be easy to do in this situation.

You are still doing a great job with the story! Thanks for continuing to update quickly!

Great story. The action is well built up and I am looking to see what happens next! Please update soon!