| Reviews for Ocean |
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Guest chapter 1 . 9/28/2012 so kewt. :) |
LandofMidnightRain chapter 1 . 7/12/2012 Aw. This is so sweet. I loved it. It's short, yes, but this concept is absolutely adorable. Thanks for writing this! MidnightRain |
XXCaptainUsoppXX chapter 1 . 4/28/2012 Dawww, really cute. :D I like the idea of young Tenzin being afraid of the air... |
JackieStarSister chapter 1 . 4/23/2012 This is a really good idea! I love seeing old and new characters interacting. The storyline was cute, too. :) |
Woodshrew chapter 1 . 3/24/2012 Teo is the best |
Spry chapter 1 . 2/26/2012 EL GASP! IT'S TEO! Sorry, I just like Teo, and people don't write about him as often as they should. AWESOME! It's got a little Tenzin and Teo and in-characterness and an awesome metaphore thingy about gliding- all this can only mean one thing: FAVORITE! ..and a cupcake for you. So I guess it means two things. But just so you know, you may now increase your awesomeness points by the power of ten because you wrote this story. And I love it. YOU AWESOME! Spry! |
juemengci chapter 1 . 2/26/2012 To think Teo would be the one to help Tenzin with flying...that is a pretty beautiful concept. I really like Teo's logic here and how he persuades Tenzin and helps him overcome his fears and doubts about flying. It's a touch of irony that I found pretty amusing. It's also really realistic, considering that a lot of times children are influenced more heavily by their peers and not their parents. It was interesting to see that dynamic played out here with Teo. Cleverly written as always Raine! |