excellent

Most heart wrenching loving family love of these four I've read TT...all the emotion, characterization, story and development in these three chapters just knocked the breathe out of me. I loved every single word. Everything was perfect! So perfect that I'm going to be greedy and ask for an epilogue...puppy eyes...

Oh. My. Gosh.

I cried.

And it didn't help that "Collide" was playing when I was reading this!

"Even the best fall down sometimes, even the wrong words seem to rhyme..."

Oh gosh! That part was playing right when I read the part when the Doctor shows River psychically everything he was feeling! And gosh... this fic was just so amazing! **bows in awe to your writing skill**

:( *bawling* All the tears and the Rory feels and the Docter Feels and just love and pondishness and asdgfaksd. Love.

Oh that last sentence. That. Last. Sentence. And also the part where he's stroking her hair. 3 Gorgeous.

Yikes, scary situation. I like rory taking charge!

Oh my goodness, River... Poor, poor River! And... grrrrrrrrrrr, Silents! xPPPPP And awwwwwwwwwwww, angry Doctor! And yaaaaay, Rory to the rescue!

Also, loved the detailing of why River brings the Doctor along. xD So fantastic, and so, so true. :))) I mean, probably. But... still. You know what I mean. ;)

:) fab x