Cool story, kinda reminds me of that song 'bust your kneecaps'

Maybe Jazz and Prowl could meet again and Jazz gets turned into Prowl's pet or something. Also awesome story please do more

Oh wow. Amazing story. You have me hooked!

Please dont let this be all. Its so good, please continue!

Awesome story just sad what poor Jazz has to go though, on a lighter note it's good to know prowl sort of still loves jazz... In a creepy scary way...

Ok seriously I'm mad right now because I love this story and you haven't updated it in forever so if u update it now I will give ur bunnies all the chocolate in the world and then u can have the carrots because I just want more and ugh excuse my terrible grammar right now this is totally one sentence and not just a run on.

Very interesting story, can't wait to read more. :)

The plot thickens! I would scream at the twins to run away but it wouldn't do any good...

Ah, geez, dive bombing into the drama! 8O

Hope Wing will be ok!

Ooh, I can't wait till this whole 'Bluestreak is Silverstreak, brother of The Gambler, who are the brothers of Barricade, the Lord of Praxus, and the middle brother owes Sideswipe a favor' situation clears up for them and Sunstreaker can make use of it or something, whatever you have planned, I don't even know, but can't wait, and this was one shitty sentence.

THE PLOT THIOCKENS

Nothing serious he says... your contacts have never even heard of Bluestreak he says...
This is going to be fun.

Can't wait for the next chapter! XD

Until all are one,
Chistarpax

Wonderful update! Oh, now I am really curious about Prowl and his bonding...was it all part of a bet? And why would he be stealing sparklings? That opening scene was so sad and very well written! Sunny is on the move, and I can't wait to see what he thinks when he finds out who Bluestreak really is! I bet he is going to want him even more ) As for Smokey, he is very lucky his loving big brother didn't smash him over the head for his silliness! Do we know what he lost? *runs back to last chappy to see* but I'm guessing Prowl was just in a good mood from his prior exploits so he let it slide. Hope your RL keeps behaving as well as your muses! I love this story )

I certainly enjoyed this chapter and I really hope to read another soon and see how the hunt for Bluestreak and Smokescreen settling his debt with Sideswipe. Keep up the good work!

I wonder as to the reasons why Prowl is the 'traitorous ex-student,' why Bluestreak took the sparkling, what Sideswipe's 'favor' is going to be, and what Jazz's mission is. I'm glad I read this story. It's full of suspense, action, deviousness, humor, and mystery. At first, when I tried to get into it a long while ago, I admit I didn't like it. But then again, I didn't give it much of a chance. So when I saw that you had updated it, I thought I would give it another go. And I was thankfully not disappointed. I'm loving the story and can't wait until you update again. Have a great day.