They're capable of being a great team in this.

An interesting tale. I especially loved the implication that the experiences Regina inflicted on Belle changed her. I think that fact gets over looked. I will say that Rumplestilskin was far more straight forward than I can imagine he would be. A creature who has lived for more than three centuries is not one who would change easily or quickly.

All together though, a very nice story.

Super cute xx

Super cute xx

What a fantastic story! I loved seeing Gold and Emma working together. I was a little surprised at Gold's very open sharing about Belle, but I got over it. :) The antagonism between Gold and Regina was well played. Really just overall well done. And I really enjoyed the song from Princess Bride. I love that song. What a perfect fit. Thanks so much for sharing this story.

thank you for this really wonderful piece of funfiction!

Believe it or not, I JUST found this fanfic and it is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! I have read a lot of Rumbelle, but this one was just divine. I will check to see if you have written anything else and be sure to read it. I always think when I am reading that if I can see the story like I am watching a movie, then the writing is really wonderful-and that is what this did! Thanks so much for an entertaining "brief flicker of light amidst an ocean of darkness"! Carry on!

beautifully played! so loved it. thanks for confirming my suspicions about the lyrics. thought i recognized them.

Hi, are you going to write a sequel? because it's a great story, but just the beginning, it would be a shame to leave it at that.

I really loved the beginning of your fanfiction. Although it is somewhat unlikely that Mr. Gold has a conversation so intimate with Emma, was very cute and convinced me. I will continue to read!

Loved this! I like how you chose Bonnie, instead of all the "isabelle's" and everything else floating around there. As you said, she lies with the truth, and since Bonnie means beauty, as Belle does, you hit the nail on the head.

This was such a nice story; I loved seeing Mr. Gold and Emma (and Mary Margaret too) working together. I hope to see more Once Upon a Time fics from you!

*still telling the story of them* and then the beast took his beauty upstairs and they then took off all their clothing-

That was a wonderful story. It brought tears to my eyes at the end. I really love the stories that have Mr. Gold saving Bell. Thank for sharing this wonder plot.

Amazing story. It is rich with plot, funny and romantic. Thanks for sharing.