Reviews for Betrayal
judyshue809 chapter 42 . 6/8
Excellent story. Wow, you have a wild imagination. Well done. Thanks
Guest chapter 42 . 5/9
This was good I really enjoyed reading
tanyaleigh chapter 40 . 3/20/2019
Wow! So many times I would have reviewed but the story to so amazing it is almost painful to stop to type... want to keep reading! I'm almost sad Nyx killed him- I think it would have been a bigger blow to his ego to be captured but this plays out nicely!
HermioneIncarnate chapter 42 . 12/7/2018
Riveting! This story is original and fantastic. You did a great job of weaving canon together and giving us an alternative reality. I would love to read a sequel. Amazing job!
Fiarillo chapter 42 . 7/15/2018
Wow roller coaster ride indeed. Excell3nt!
Tommy14 chapter 42 . 7/14/2018
Thank you for sharing this wonderful story.
Bonnie chapter 42 . 7/5/2018
Oh how very sad.
Will Tank be alone forever?
Knowing what he knows now?
Was the betrayal worth it?
tanyaleigh chapter 42 . 5/15/2018
I wrote my post when I saw the Fin- I love this ending! Talk about heart breaking!
tanyaleigh chapter 41 . 5/15/2018
This was tons of fun to read! Not a "normal" Babe story but, very enjoyable. And honestly it was nice to read something kinda different. Thanks for sharing!
Sunny Okanagan chapter 42 . 3/26/2018
I'm blown away. Such a different plot and all kinds of twists. It's hard to believe it's over. Love your attention to detail and the quotes and references you used. Thank you for sharing
Daffybduck chapter 42 . 10/25/2017
Wow...just wow
Stephannie1014 chapter 42 . 10/5/2017
Excellent story! Thank you for everything you put into it!
Pammmiisue chapter 1 . 8/16/2017
So I finally finished and I have to say, I really loves it! You did a great job making me feel what the characters are feeling. My first comment said I hated it. That meant you were doing such a great job writing that I felt that passionate to leave a comment like that. This has just moved up to be one of my favorite FanFic Babe stories.
Pammmiisue chapter 7 . 8/14/2017
just got done reading chapter 7 and right now I hate this story. lol. I hope it gets better fast!
brandyrennu chapter 41 . 1/9/2017
I would love another story on how they make it work.
Great story
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