Beautiful! Amazingly beautiful!

nice

Good story

I'm glad you let Hermione reunite with Harry.

Very elegant ending to a wonderous story. Thank you for sharing.

ROFLOL "Yes dear." hahahahahaha

Great story

thanks for a great story

Very very nice!

Good grins. Thanks for a fun read, nicely done!

I enjoyed the story until that ending with hermione. She should have been stuck with dumbledore and the others.

Loved this story but I'm not sure I like what you did with Hermione at the end. Overall very good.

Sweet story!

I don't get it. If Harry was in love with Hermione, why didn't he support her to get the masteries she needed to continue teaching? The amount of money needed for that is neglectable for Harry. Also if Harry truly loved her, he would have had Ron killed. Harry hates him enough for that and it would save Hermione from a life in hell.

I am actually quite annoyed that you suddenly included Hermione in Harry's relationship. It bugs me how many people bash the Weasleys, but refuse to acknowledge that Hermione isn't perfect. Also, while Harry may have loved Hermione when they left Hogwarts. Growing up, marrying another woman, having children with her and not talking to someone for so many years really changes people and their relationships. I don't believe that Harry would simply accept her as another wife. Friends? Sure! Close relationship? Why not. Wife? Definitely not.
In my opinion it destroys any influence Morag has had on Harry's growth as a character.

That being said, there should be more stories with Morag in it. Definitely bashing of the wizarding britain, but an enjoyable story all the same.

Owsum