Reviews for A Demon's Protection
4thkage chapter 15 . 6/30/2015
i never read a good story for odd couple...
i luv this couple...
i luv Ino...she's sexy and loudmouth...hehe...

she's the bad girl...obviously she's good with bad boy...

Luv ur story...
nice reading it...
good written...

yup...10/10
TheCorpseGarden chapter 15 . 2/20/2015
Well hello there!
I just wanted to let you know that I read your story over the course of 2 weeks once I'd found it. It was amazing! Such a well-thought plot, like nothing I've ever read before. You have creative talent and you should definitely continue writing when you have the time!
Thank you for an amazing read :-) It sure was nice to have something that kept me motivated to study, so I could take a break to see what happened next!
pinkrollingstone chapter 15 . 2/10/2015
Your story was uber cute and nicely done.:-)
MsAnnaBanana140 chapter 15 . 1/5/2015
hahaha aww thank YOU #LAW for this sweet ending! I was really humbled and surprised I was praised for the first time in an author's note :D so much that it motivated you to finish this story on a happy note, yes I think you did improve a lot this time with grammar and pace of the story.

I really liked the subtle flashback when you wrote how they, ahem, did the dew, the previous night; not too graphic, wasn't a full blown smut scene but just enough words to let the reader know what went down after they beat the bad guys XD

As always with a fanfic story like this anything can happen afterwards... hell it could go on forever with them two teaming up and going on adventures together! but I think this was left on a good note for us, so no need to add anymore :) This was a my desert for the whole month, so just want to say have a happy new year!
MsAnnaBanana140 chapter 14 . 12/17/2014
Hello LAW! I know this might seem like the only review I make for this story, but trust me, I've been reading Demon's Protection NONSTOP! I absolutely love this story, and I hope it doesn't end too soon, however, that may be the case :( In the beginning I found a handful of spelling mistakes and awkward dialogue and bit rushed with how Ino and Kakuzu met and I was ABOUT to just say: "screw it, I'll find something better to read."
But then I started to notice with each subsequent chapters that you have improved upon the grammar and spelling, pace and atmosphere tremendously :D
I almost gave up on this story but the plot, the potential it had, and most of all the PAIRING which I specifically search for to get here is actually quite interesting! I really hope you make a smut chap. for this story, it was getting a bit hot in the room when I read chapter 11 XD Been a while since I read some decent lemons :P
As always, I will fav/review this story b/c that is my job as an advent reader of awesome fanfiction :D
WordFairy237 chapter 14 . 3/12/2014
Please update soon, I'm addicted to the story!
speedrunner chapter 14 . 1/17/2014
WHAT THE HELL. ONE MORE CHAPTER AND SUDDENLY IT'S ON HOLD?
I'm the kind of person who always gets impatient when a fan fiction builds the relationship slowly but you made the journey of reading this story enjoyable!

Can't wait for another of your "romantic crap" ;)
Please quickly update (and finish) this story so I can live my life in peace :)
Queen Espada chapter 14 . 8/29/2013
OHMAIGAWD I FRIGGIN LOVE THIS STORY! PLEASE FINISH IT DARLING :)
VnzlHills chapter 14 . 5/30/2013
Oh snap! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
cloud-lily2223 chapter 13 . 5/7/2013
Well I certainty did not see that coming, haha. Anyway, Great story! I really like it! There isn't a lot of Kakuzu x Ino stories out there, and this is by far one of the most interesting. Kakuzu x Ino is my favorite Akatsuki x Ino pairing :3
Fantasy is now Non-Fiction chapter 13 . 3/27/2013
INOICHI YOU ARE A DEAD MAN, YOU HEAR ME? DEAD! Grrr...

Hehe, sorry ; I really enjoyed reading this chapter, I missed this story.
Gerhiel chapter 13 . 3/26/2013
Ooooohh man. If you would never gives us the honor of making a Kakuzuxoc I would eternaly grateful. I just Love they way you write his character! Of course he might have to fall in love slower If he were to be in char. Ahhhh smut.
But Woah! What's up with her dad...never saw that coming. I normally don't like it when a canon character is made the bad guy to fit the story but Inoichi isn't that important so it doesn't matter.
Gerhiel chapter 12 . 1/14/2013
Oooooo! Me! I want it! Oh and I think you do great on the fighting scenes, you show just how DAMN strong Kakuzu really is. Also, your authors notes are so funny. :P How old is your Nan? Ya never know, she might like it.
Gerhiel chapter 11 . 1/13/2013
Lol, I grinned when Ino asked if he was married. :D Well he probably will be soon.
'Twas her ARM'!? I have never read a "twas" before on this site. :P
Gerhiel chapter 10 . 12/20/2012
This deserves. SOO much more than 23 reviews. It ought to be famous. I love your kissing scenes! Oh, and I'm really sorry your CP shut down. Mine's been confiscated. :(
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