Reviews for Possession
flootzavut chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
Mmmm possessive Steve, always good ;D
quisinart4 chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
This is still so so adorable and that little deleted scene is so precious, I think we re-watched it like, twenty times in a row when we first found it hehe. This is so hot and sweet and omg the idea they've "done it everywhere else" *swoon*! ;)
h50rookie chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
First of all, I always thought that deleted scene should have been UNDELETED. (I'm making a tiny reference to it in my next fic!) And oh my geezus this story is so hot. I laughed when Kono brought up the male models to make Steve jealous. Come on, there are no male models on Earth that can even compare to Steve McG. Also... I'm with Steve. They should've done it in the kitchen. :D
poisonedship chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
.:LOL:. That was HAWT! Jealous!Steve and Possessive!Steve is always so so sexy and hot. .:LMFAO:. In the kitchen! I wouldn't stop him. Just saying. Now I need to watch this deleted scene.
lovepride chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
too good.

is that it's a one shot, otherwise just let me know the result.
badhairdays chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
OMG! I loved that deleted scene and I LOVED LOVED LOVED this :)
krissy90210 chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
Steve basically jumping Kono out of jealousy? I do not blame him, and if I was her, I'd make him jealous more often.

Thank you for posting this. I enjoyed it. There isn't enough well written fluff out there! I just wish this was longer.
missadeco chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
wowowowowowow. i haven't seen this deleted scene but i will have to go and find it now. this was hot. steve walking out of HER bedroom after having a shower in HER bathroom makes me giggle. its really sexy. the rest was fantabulous too. hot hot hot hot!
sammie28 chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
IT'S THE TALENT SCOUT! lol. I love that scene and the acknowledgement of how truly beautiful Kono is (and a nice nod to Grace Park's previous modeling). Then Kono's WTF? look and calm directions to tell him to go away, along with Danny and Steve's deadpan, "Body composition." "Bone structure." hehe.

And I love how Kono plays with Steve. He teases her with it, so I love how she playfully turns it back on him: all the benefits of being a model, and how she's sure 5-0 will do fine without her, and Steve looking stunned at all that. Steve being caught by surprise is always funny.
Amy chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
Very hot. They shouldn't have cut that scene out at all, if this is what people write from it. We need more fics like these.
cantdeletebutignoreme chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
Loved this:) I don't get why they would take that scene out of the ep! They have a bunch of scenes this season that were superfluous *cue possibly every Lori scene*

Another fic, please!
wotumba1 chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
hot!
Sidalee chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
Totally awesome. I liked their domestic little moment. And what's not to love about a possessive/jealous Steve? :D

It was funny and hot. I'm glad you wrote this.
teenycee chapter 1 . 2/10/2012
Loved it! Keep writing!
flora.s.t chapter 1 . 2/10/2012
oh so good! i saw a gif of the deleted scene on tumblr but i haven't been able to find an actual video of it. do you have a link?
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