That was amazing! I'm not usually a big fan of slash but that was incredible. Okay, so trying to finish reading it while also trying to finish a geography assignment probably wasn't the best plan but I'm glad I did it. It was definitely worth it! You write so well! (you being the two, but youse is bad grammar and I flat refuse to use it)
SFD

Hahahahaha one line in and Addie and Alonzo do not cease to disappoint xD

"Are you stalking me?"

"Stalking? Certainly not. Just following."

Oh Addie, How I adore you.

I just love them so much. If I could jump into my computer screen and into this verse to hug them both, I would. I would do it in a heartbeat without a second of regret. Well, maybe after 'Lonz clobbered me but it comes with the territory I suppose.

I really would love to see more of them. I just love the personalities you've given them and they go so well together! 3

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Mistoffelees shall LIVE! For as long as it takes for the natural way of things to catch up with him, at least.

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I think I rather like this side of the characterization you have given Gus. Very fatherly and he happened to be just what Mistoffelees needed. It was very fresh and I liked it a lot.

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Theo again, I'm assuming you're just leaving Theo in there on purpose now xD

Like that little scene. Lots of characters running around. I got a little bit lost in there but I found my place once they began to trickle away.

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Oh sneaky Cori, you. I figured you were trying something like that when you first picked up that phone to call in the Army, Air Force, everyone, and their mother.

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Tsk tsk tsk, so unprepare with no ring Mac? That is so like you xD

They are so sweet together and a mushy Mac always makes me grin. He's just so, gah. He's that goofy kid who isn't sure he is doing this whole romance thing right.

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Pounce,

Romance.

You're doing it right. :)

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Still a bit nervous but it's nice to see Mistoffelees begining to open back up to the world.

OH GOODNESS ITS ALMOST OVER

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Been wondering when this pair was going to show back up again. I guess here is my answer. xD

They are cute, not my favorite couple, but cute and sweet.

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What a sweet little ending, once again paying a salute to the begining of the story. He even brought roses again. How sweet of him.

I really liked this story and, despite my lack of response for a while there, I thoroughly enjoyed it. It was exciting, it was funny, it was emotional, it was great :)

Write on!

Hah, I have returned once more. I must say that I was really tempted to read your other story, but I decided that I should finish this one before moving onto others.

So, now both Cori and Misto have killed someone. I think they are both a little shell shocked from that and it's definitely a little intimedating to think about.

And Misto lost his powers just like Cassandra said, surprise surprise. Or at least, he cannot feel his magic any longer.

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That scene was just so sweet near the end I've lost count of the 'I love you's they have thrown back and forth at each other but the way they curled up in the bed, basking in the happy hopefulness... That was new and I definitely liked it a lot.

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Haha, I like Pounce. Nuff said there really

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I cannot say that Russell approves, but I think Sonya and Grids together is really rather sweet. They may be a little awkward right now, but I think that's rather endearing to the couple.

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Hey look there's Theo again :) Lol now I understand that it was Tugger, even though you told me before. The last time Theo popped up it was between a Misto and Cori thing so I was a bit confused.

So now the story is finally begining to be published to the world. The dark and dirty truth of it all. Oh how glorious!

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Goodness me, it was so long ago that the two of them were walking down the street arm in arm while heading back to one of their apartments from one of their dates. So much has happened since then. This walking scene dramatically shows how much things have changed.

And I don't think I've noticed it till now but in the last few chapters you've been saying things such as "padding" instead of "walking" and "pawing" instead of "handing". Have you always been doing that?

Down Russell, bad, back, begone, foul demon!

The scene was oddly kind of cute, though both Sonya and Grids were in mid panic attacks. Oh well, it's still pretty fluffy anyway.

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Oh they're such a happy family... Marion and Genghis have such a /loving/ relationship!

Though I kind of had to snicker at Marion's snarky comments

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Addie is just so tactful and elloquent...

"Um..."

I think I'm in love with him right now xD

"Well, hell, is he starting a collection?"

Hahahahaha xD I had to laugh even more at that. Oh god, Addie...

And then he even has a plan. Just... marry me? Or marry both me and Alonzo? That would be cool, right?

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AAAAAand he knocks on the front door. I like Misto's plan. It must have taken him ages to come up with it.

"Oh, Mistoffelees," I had to comment on how much of the damsel in distress she is in this situation.

B'awww.. Sniff sniff... He loves Cori...

Cassandra, squakin' like a loon about her hocus pocus crap.

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THERE'S ANOTHER ONE! Grids name was Gwen :D

"I was worried." "About me?" No, about the clothes you're wearing. Gosh, lol xD

So everyone is unsure of what to do, but I'm pretty sure someone really should deal with the police.

I'm just picking on you two, you know that right? xD I mean no harm or insult

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Oh hey look, It's Demeter.

They've got a great relationship too. And Cori finally cracks as well.

Well aren't you two just like a pair of bulls in a china shop?

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Addie's a nice person... sometimes... I feel bad for Pounce too.

Gosh all the characters in this story still living at this point just need to gather around and give eachother hugs and have a pity party. That sounds like fun.

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Ohya, Car was Pounce's dad. Tch... yeah I forgot... So now he really can be with Jems. And he owns his own company to boot. He's got a load on his plate, doesn't he?

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And tying up loose ends with the rest of the little characters...

Victoria and Mac. They are going to make a cute family after the scandal part all blows over...

I want to know what the kit looks like. If it's just a plain white kitten, I'm going to laugh so hard over them worrying so much about nothing.

It's funny.. Does Mac have a fetish for white queens or something? Both Grids and Vic are pure white and they are the only two I've seen you guys pair up with him.

"Didn't you know? Griddlebone of Course!" Oh I can just picture Genghis' face when he's saying that xDDDD

PFFFFF That entire scene I can just picture a coy smile on Genghis' face as he told Growltiger like he was saying: "Yeah, I've tapped that. You got sloppy seconds, dude." Hahaha a highly idealized comic might be in order xD

Hm, I feel that in the scene with Tiger and Grids that she was really just going through the motions and Tiger was just being a hormonal and horny old creep. I really didn't see anything romantic in their kiss at all.

Ha...Haha... HAHA... HAHAHAHAHAHA! I died laughing two lines into this one. The irony of asking for Addie while talking to him was just too much. I choked on my water.

"I shot the police commissioner..."

My reaction: Oh dear.

And then..

"Could always share mine." "No." "I was joking.." "Like hell you were joking..."

Oh the things that make me laugh XD

Fluff fluff fluff angst fluff fluff...

Alright now they killed everyone but the siamese's gang. Now they just need to stab eachother.

I don't really think Henderson is really that bag of a character. Sure he works for Genghis and all, but I don't think he's truly, for lack of a better term, evil. He's just doin' his job. I kinda like him for that.

More fluffiness before we remember that Misto is a shattered goblet. Feel so bad for this kid sometimes...

Cute more family fluffiness, some sadness and then...

"Upon seeing them approaching, Mac had had a minor panic attack before being shoved from the car by Admetus."

I had to chuckle. You still get humor in there somehow xD Oh Addie, you have the emotional range of a teaspoon sometimes. And Mac, your just a klutz around girls sometimes xD

Then Plato shows up...

watch?v6h_IjYMXZWA 0:58-1:07 was what was going on in my mind while reading it xDDDD Sorry, I shall continue reading...

Oh Two lines down from when Plato collapsed, he's already a body. Shame...

And it's confirmed! I was almost hoping the dirtbag would come to seek his revenge or even change his ways, but he died. Oh well..

DUN DUN DUUUNNN... Looks like the Evil Trio is going after poor Alonzo now... I hope he'll be okay. I really like Alonzo.

And then the Evil Trio cause more harm. Genghis can be a real jerk sometimes, but he was quite the hero in what I've read so far of your other magic story with the loud and quiet magics.

So my very much anticipated return!

Unfortunately I can't remember a whole lot from the last time I reviewed, and actually I didn't even read this entire chapter in one sit down. I probably picked it up again right at the scene in Misto and Cori's bedroom.

WHICH I found another one! Aha! So which one's Theodore? Cori or Misto?

Liked the chess scene as well. Made me think your Plato had a thought for a moment when he acted like he cared that Misto would probably only live for five more years, more or less.

B'awwww I felt so bad for Alonzo in the end of this chapter. Their little kiss was cute as well as our patched tom's follow-up comment.

Hey, I've been meaning to ask, but who plays who in these roleplays? Quite obviously VS plays Misto and Harquill plays Cori, but who else do the two of you play?

Okay okay okay I know I'm behind, I'm right on Chapter 24 and I haven't started it yet. I'll get right on it when I have the time... but first...

OH GOD YOU ANON! WHY DID YOU HAVE TO SPOIL EVERYTHING FOR ME ;-;

This was a wonderful story (I followed it slightly obsessively the whole way through).

My only complaint is that you killed off the antagonists awfully fast. But otherwise, it was thrilling and had twist after twist.

Haha, I love the Munk and Alonzo bit xD

"Munk, you were sitting right there."

"Was I?"

I also noticed the Genhis refered to hus son as the kit, but got rather defensive when Addy mentioned him. Maybe he does care for him a fraction of a bit?

And Misto realizes his dreams as a housewife are void. Kinda feel bad for him. I know what it's like to be locked up and run out of things to do.

Teehee McDonalds, how tactful Addy

I liked the ending scene as well. The way it just stopped, it wan't a cliffhanger and it wasnt a long drawl to seperate the chapters.

Mean little bit at the begining there. Jacobi is a real ass :V

And they are reuinited! Doesn't take too many paragraphs for them to get carried away too xD Ah, those boys.

Okay, okay I know this has practically nothing to do with the rest of the story but...

Cath? Who the /heck/ is Cath?

"Everlasting cat, Cath." Is what Macavity says when Vi says I love you. I'm so confused. Is this one of those stories you guys tried to change their names and make it a novel?

Moving on...

Smooth Mac, it's not even six in the morning and you have a chick over at your place. What /else/ are they supposed to think? Didn't take long to put two and two together. Cori had a brain fart, but still xD

I'm having so many grammar fails and spelling fails it's not even funny.

Ah, nothing like the time honored elegance of ancient words of wisdom...

"We're screwed."

Yup, nothing like it.

Jer, Pounce... Don't you know it's bad to hide things from your friends, hm? Don't tell Bomba, though. She'll just go blab and tell everyone.

Gaaaahhh~ So short! oAo

Genghis needs to get some PMS pills or something. I suggust anger management classes?

And then Admetus comes back on the scene and forgets that he doesn't have a hat. Misto and Cori are then horrified at said imaginary hat tipping and naturally Misto would not want to go with such an insane loon.

Okay my BS aside...

This is where the readers mind will wonder and ponder: "WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT?" because we have been with the story long enought that we think we will be able to predict where it's going but the smartest of us will figure out that we have a 99.9 percent chance of being WRONG.

Post more... -flutters weakly- I'm a flower and this story is my sunshine~

Mental breakdowns galore! Oh how fun! Misto and Cori really have no idea where to go from here, do they? It's kind of sad but I know something will come up and turn the tide somehow, for better or for worse.

Mac and Vic~ And, my goodness, he passed on the oportunity to make a sarcastic comment? Victoria you've changed that man!

Urgh, Jones has Male PMS I swear. He's such a dirtbag. Makes me want to slap him but then again I think I'll be dragged away by his minions for doing that. Oh well, probably would be worth it.

How sweet, Munkustrap doing something so nice for Electra.

I just noticed how many couples are floating around in this story. PouncexJem, MacxVic, MunkxElectra, and of course CorixMisto. I noticed because of how many 'aw' moments are now in the story xD

I about had a heart attack when Jenny said Saint Mary's Hospital. That's where I live :O

Typical headstrong Misto. "Tis but a mere fleshwound," 'Have to see Coricopat'

And now it all begins to tie together! Marion really is such a cute kid.

And then everyone meets everyone else! Yeaaaay! We're all friends now! (more or less) Gotta love Doc here, just throwing everyone out. Typical doctor. Half expected for Sonya and Cohen to have an epic argument in Russian. That would have been sweet.

Fffff Cori and Misto fluff~

And then we learn how Griddle comes into play. I can honestly say I was not really expecting that at all. That just came up and slapped me in the face. I can totally see it though.

Wow Sonya was really blunt in this scene. Must not have had his pot of coffee yet... Normally he's more cordial. Huh

So good old Doc saves them yet again, though to Admetus slight disappointment that he couldn't keep the outfit or the ride.

"The doctor was being unreasonable."

"Can I see him?"

"No."

Gosh, Doc didn't hesitate at all to back up Munk's statement xD

Oooh awesome chapter!

Update very very very soon, please!

Luv HGP!