You need to finish this story with a happy ending where Neal goes home and he remembers everything and he draws and paints then says, "I haven't painted in a while" When Peter comes into his apartment. This story is far from over.

Hope you write a sequel soon

That's definitely not fair.. You can't just leave a story like that.. Hope you write a sequel

hope u write another story soon.

hope u write another white collar story soon.

I love this story so far! I wonder whether he will be ok... obviously he HAS to be though. I wonder whether he will wake up and remember everything. I hope he doesn't though to be honest. I want to see the recovery process if possible :)))

oh don't tell me it was that ba$t rd 'Joe' that his stupid weak mother refused to dump knowing he hurt her children

umm I know Kate's death was hard on him but a heart attack really? Just from hearing about? That seems highly unlikely

such an intense story. really awesome

EXCELENTE HISTORIA PERO SE QUEDO EN LO MEJOR, PRONTO LA CONTINUACION!

Great. I think there should be another one. Haha! )

Excellent job. Thanks for a great ride!

My gosh, you beat the bloody crap out out of almost everyone! And I admit that I enjoyed it thoroughly...the drama and angst, at least.

This was a great fic. I was in love the minute that I read that Neal was in pajama pants in chapter One. :P And I thought the getting-hit-by-the-car injuries would be the main event...boy was I wrong. Anyways, the dialogue was great, and the visual picture you painted was nice and vivid (especially whenever Neal was sad or in deep thought...I visualized his magical eyes and sympathetically grinned like an idiot. xD)

And I actually am a bit at a loss for words right now; either way, it was AWESOME. And filled with such beautifully painful whumping. And filled with a great plot. And AWESOME. Did I mention that yet? :P Lovelovelovelove...I'll even go and say ten stars for this. ;)

P.S. You can count me in for reading the sequel. _

This is complete? O_o Why do I feel like this is so far from done, it's not funny? Neal's in the hospital half dead. His dad's out to kill him. The mini mafia guys got away. How is this over? -spaz-

I mean it was intense and it was great to read, but is there no more? No sequel? No epilogue? No Neal regaining his memories? Sibling reunion? Catching evil, psychotic step-father? . Wargh!

T_T Well if this really is complete, thank you for getting me all pumped up in the drama and I hope you write something more for it in the future.

Oohhhhhh. Super duper glad there will be a sequel. I hope you get started on it soon so we dont have to wait too long to read more of your amazing writings