| Reviews for Of The Past, And Of Dark Magics |
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GodFairy chapter 7 . 8/5/2017 Someone will be continuing this story?c |
Person chapter 7 . 7/14/2017 COME ON! PLEASE CONTINUE! IF UR A WRITER THEN U SHOULD REALLY FINISH A BOOK! LIKE SERIOUSLY! IF UR GOING TO WRITE SOMETHIG THEN ACTUALLY FINISH IT! SOME WRITER U ARE! Sorry I just get really upset when I read an amazing book like ur work and u don't finish it, it's very very upsetting. P.S. no offense |
Guest chapter 7 . 6/29/2017 Will you be continuing the story? |
amaterasu91 chapter 7 . 1/31/2017 PLEASE , UPDATE |
Guest chapter 7 . 6/18/2016 This if awesome! |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2015 UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON |
disgurlruvs chapter 7 . 8/12/2015 This has been such an intriguing story that I had found a while back, but completely lost it! :3 Now that I have found this story again, I'm a bit sad at hearing your struggles. Though, I would like to thank you for trying your best and giving us these 7 chapters so far! I hope inspirations hits your or someone adopts! (A bit selfish of me, but I don't think that I, personally, would give justice to this story if I took it under my care:) ) Either way, I am just thankful for you providing us so many precious chapters even through your struggles. Onto feedback on the actual story! I loved those few scenes of Gray, Gajeel, and Happy with Natsu. They each warmed my heart! Plus, how you kept Natsu's full condition hidden from the guild really kept me on the edge of my chair, hoping that they would find out the next paragraph. Exactly what many potentially amazing stories lack. I like how you didn't rush through Fairy Tail finding Natsu and finding out about his mental state! His backstory is also quite different and interesting, something I would have loved to read more about. I really liked Natsu's interactions with Zeref and Zeref's responses. And Natsu's daddy! What a jerk. *pout* How dare he hurt little baby Natsu! Gajeel needs to find this fool and rip his guts out too! Maybe Gray and Happy can gang up on him along with Gajeel... Oh! And Zeref too! You can't forget about him! Yay for brother fluff! It's so adorable! *sparkling eyes* Overall, I liked everything and this story to pieces! Great job on this story and feel no pressure! We should be thankful for the couple of chapters you HAVE provided us with. :) Have a wonderful day and keep up the great work! |
Guest chapter 7 . 8/1/2015 next chapter please? :( (this is story is amazing and i like it?! ) but this is story is incomplete :( where is the next chap. ca;t wait for the next chap. |
f.tastarossa chapter 7 . 7/13/2015 sorry for late review TvT. I still love your story! good job! |
DecipherMe333 chapter 7 . 7/1/2015 FINALLY YOU UPDATED! YAY GOOD JOB :) |
Daygon Yuuki chapter 7 . 6/21/2015 You are abandoning the story. Whyyyyy. This is so good. Can I take it over? Can I adopt it? |
Ominous Rain chapter 7 . 6/20/2015 Awww :( Poor Natsu. I hope someone adopts from you so the story will finish but if not I hope you get inspiration for this! |
brabinsky chapter 7 . 6/19/2015 Me gustó el capítulo por favor continualo pobre natsu quiero saber más sobre el -_- espero la conty :3 |
Wolves Silver Wind chapter 7 . 6/19/2015 Well, if you decide to continue the story, please do tell. But thank you so much for giving us another chapter! For now I must go to my pack! |
SakuraPetal91 chapter 6 . 6/18/2015 Please update soon, this is so freaking awesome |