| Reviews for Inseparable |
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Guest chapter 1 . 8/3 Wincest? What a strange way to say Spiderman thread |
Jojona344 chapter 1 . 3/20 So... they are twins and 17, but Hilbert is a head taller? Doesn’t seem logical to me... |
claudio1234567890meza chapter 1 . 6/28/2019 Incest is wincest |
Slayer chapter 1 . 5/18/2019 BEST FANFIC EVER chess shipping for life |
Leikiz chapter 1 . 4/2/2017 Well, this is a pairing I didn't know I needed. Black x White? Ehh, sure whatever. Black x White incest? Sold! |
Gray chapter 1 . 1/6/2017 Wow...just wow. This is probably one of the best, if not the best, fanfic about Black and White that I have read. Kudos to you, man, you did great. |
unknown chapter 1 . 1/5/2016 good story but in my opinion you need to continue this story |
Mr. Pro chapter 1 . 11/21/2015 This is the worst one yet... it's not just two people such as: MistyAsh or MayGary etc. But this is incest (forgive me if I spelled it wrong) and in addition ALL I LISTED ARE TEN AND SHOULD NOT HAVE INTERCOURSE, and yes, I mean sexually. ALSO HILBERT AND HILDA ARE ALSO TEN. So please if you have friends that have sexual fanfics, tell them from Pro, to keep to themselves and/or take down from the web. Good day! |
Zedric751 chapter 1 . 8/2/2015 Great Job! |
Satanios chapter 1 . 8/1/2015 The best Pkmn fanfiction I have ever read, awesome story, humore and romance 3 I hardly ask you to make other chapters, this needs more! (at least one more chapt, i really need to read more of this) If it's out of 10, i'd give it 100/10. I'll be waiting for the next chapt. ! |
crystalblue19 chapter 1 . 3/21/2015 Aw, that was so cute and I just love how it gradually went from Hilda teasing Hilbert to him teasing her instead. xD |
FrostingFlames chapter 1 . 5/13/2014 You know, I can just picture right after the ocean scene, Kyogre popping out and somehow managing to flip them the bird. Moment breakers FTW, people! |
INSTAGRAMcracker chapter 1 . 4/25/2014 *sqeals with delight* |
heroman45 chapter 1 . 4/7/2014 First: That was totally a Lion King reference. This story is actually pretty cute. I like it better than the Volkner story. |
SilentDreamer23 chapter 1 . 3/10/2014 Agree with the last commenter. Rushed towards the end. You mentioned N only once and I would have liked to see him appear a couple of times to fight it out with Black. Otherwise great story. The emotions between them were clear and on point. |