I really want a sequel where they see the idiots in court and dick decides not to press charges

't take Dick anywhere...

Also with joker and the riddler you can beat them, not with teens..

this was so good. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. I was so scared. amazing

Man this was so well thought out and gripping! I couldn’t stop reading till the end!

Interesting twist to have 'villains' for once who aren't crazy or plain greedy or something, just normal teens who let themselves be misguided into doing stupid things but never intending to do real harm. I think it's typical for that age and a situation like that (not being fully accepted/supported by your family and in love) to make wrong choices and not being able to foresee the possible consequences. Good work there!
I'm not sure the medical stuff was exactly accurate and although CPR is rather exhausting, someone as fit and trained as Bruce should be able to keep going for a while longer. Plus, I don't think he would ever willingly hand over the task of keeping Dick alive to someone else if not absolutely necessary. But that's just my opinion.
Nice story!

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

the feels

auauaaaauuauaahh how cute

" I said you wouldnt be bored"... now that is absolutely hilarious.. haha thanks ... great book

This is really really good! I love the way you write bruce! This is really great work!

This was really good and I think you did a good job showcasing Bruce's detective skills along with the father/son bond without being over the top. Nice work.

*sees title*
*has VSauce flashbacks*

I really want you to do a sequel with the kid trying to apologize to dick

This was really good. I loved how you displayed the characters. and their reactions to the situations.

This story is very well written. I have read it multiple times, along with so.e of your other works, and I think your a great writer

Great work: )