Holy crap I loved this story, I wish I'd found it years ago. The idea was phenomenal and fun. The pacing was sublime. The characterization was fantastic, I especially loved Pip and Damien's relationship. Damien was written so awesomely so thank you for that considering how few fics he's actually in. Your writing style was easy to follow and just so enthralling! It felt like very natural conversations throughout the entirety. I couldn't take my eyes off the pages it was just that good.

Great job, Dude!

How did I not discover this story before?! It's 2013 and I'm just seeing this now!

OK, first of all, Your story is amazing! I've been reading this over the past few weeks and every day I fall more and more in love with it! I love how you write! The way you capture the characters is just...Perfect! Seriously, this is like one of the best things I've ever read! I also love all the plot that's there.. Like everything about hell and the seal. It kept me in suspense!
Seriously, If South Park wasn't a show and you owned it, You could publish this! D OK, I'm gonna go read more of your stories now!

really cute! I was hoping that Daimon ended up with someone though. I thought him and Kyle were actually cute.

can't...stop...READING! :3

I read all of this and I loved it!

Everyone was in character, very believable, and lovable!

This was very original and unique, it could have been and episode or published book.

Great piece of work that I will gladly read again anytime

awww... it's over. Great story! I looooovvvved it, but of course you already know that C: CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR 100 REVEIWS! You eared every single one and then some I can't wait to read more fics of yours in the (near? fingers crossed!) future. And again- I love this story so much and I'm so proud of you for creating such a masterpiece :D Keep writing 3 -Loren

Enjoyed this story from start to finish. Ambiguous ending but that's how I like stories. While it's obvious who you mean as the new student, there are still a bunch of other South Park characters that could fit that bill.

The part with the demon showing up in the last couple of chapters though, I have to admit, was a bit sudden. There was no build up for it; the demon just shows up out of nowhere and while you give some exposition on how it possessed Kenny, there were no hints that the demon was trying to enter the mortal world. Or maybe there were and I didn't see them. Still, I think that was the weakest part of the story.

On the whole it was good. I had a feeling that Damien was going to develop feelings for Kyle but the question remains is that is it requited? Kyle definitely sees Damien as more of a friend now but is there room for more? Something for a reader like myself to consider.

You know, it could have been interesting that as an unexpected price, Stan lost his feelings towards Kyle. Even though Damien called it quits early on their deal, something like sparing someone on the verge of death would still have some kind of price extracted. Another thing to consider, for myself that is.

Kenny being protective over Kyle, and with good reason, could have served as a better antagonist because while Kenny does care about Kyle, our favorite pervert could have gone too far in such a thing. And after the events in that motel room, I have a feeling that Kenny's going to be laying low for a bit more out of shame than anything. He put his best friends in danger and feels bad about it. At the same time, I'm glad you didn't make Cartman a de facto antagonist. the resident fatass, on some level, did care about Kyle but did his best to hide it. After Kyle gets better, he did do a good job of hiding his concern.

On the whole, the story is good. Other than a couple things, I wouldn't change a thing.

aww! TTTT i wanna cry in happiness! it was such a sad yet heart warming chapter. I have a feeling that the new kid is someone that is definitely not normal at all xD And i'm really happy that i made you happy with all my reviews! I hope you keep up the writing and hopefully i get to review your other future stories too! :3

*Crying* Noo! I-Its over? *sobs*

Request: C-Can you wr-write a Dyle fanfic gor me?

P-Please, Pretty Please

Great story! I'm looking forward to the last chapter! And, yes, I would very much like a PM! (:

Aww i think i wantz to cry ... its already the end? man i feel so bad that Damien had to leave but so touched at what he said to Stan. although i have to admit i am kind of a perv for thinking there might have been a little hot scene there in the end. heh, had to look back up at the rating xD

can't wait for the last and final chapter hun! update soon!

This is one of the best fan-fictions that I've read. I haven't been able to stop reading it. Can't wait for the last chapter!

Ok, here's somthing I've been thinking on for a while! In an earlier chapter, Damien said that he got everything he wanted even if he didn't ask, so my theory is that he fell in love with Kyle, and even though he didn't ask, in order to bring Kyle to Hell so he could be with Damien, he got sick, and ThATS why Damien helped Stan in the first place! Because this was all his fault!

I'm not sure whether to love you or hate you... I'm stuck in between... I mean come on!how can you already be thinking of ending it and give us readers a big cliffy at the end of this chapter! so much for getting Stan's body and Style love back... please update soon?

I'm so sorry for not reviewing! I've always been reading and stuff but I was being too lazy to leave a simple review D: Sorry!

Well, f*cking finally Stan has his body back... Or apparently not... Huh, confusing. And I never imagined Kenny would be possessed! That was a good one :D Now the story is more exciting than ever!

Please update soon! I need to see what happens next with these little boys :D