Omg I love this story so much! I love the relationship that you have built up between Rome and America and the influence that he had on her from the beginning. Very well done!

oooohhh, i can't wait to see what happens next. annnd what would happen if America gets older? would she start mention something of rome? or leaving details of him?

I'm actually in tears at how beautiful this is! Can I please have more?

This is a wonderfully well written story! You definitively have a distinct voice, and you’re very talented with descriptions and characterizations. You allow the reader to empathize with the characters, and give detailed descriptions of their emotions,wants, and needs. It’s true to history and insightful. You’re an amazing writer, keep it up! (I know this hasn’t been updated in a while, but this deserves praise!)

Kinda feel a little sad for England. He had no chance with Rome in the picture since the beginning. Amazing story.

Pobre inglaterra T-T

Reading this again for like the fourth or fifth time, maybe the sixth. Two years since you last updated, and I'm wondering if you've abandoned this story. Please don't. It's fucking amazing and I can't wait to see where it goes from here. Will it stay true to history? Or will it end up branching off in accordance to the added influence of Rome? Please, please continue this glorious gem of a story.

This has got to be one of the best and most put-together fics that I have found in the Hetalia fandom, and honestly, it's one of my absolute favorites that I've happened to be lucky enough to stumble upon. Absolutely incredible plot, insanely unique story basis, the list goes on and on... it all just adds up to a very good fanfiction with a lot of potential.

If it's continued.

Please continue? This honestly makes my head spin 'cause it's so good. Rome/America sadly enough is a really rare pairing to find inside of the fandom, although it kinda makes more sense than some of the other more crackish-ships, considering how America's government was in part modeled off of some aspects of Ancient Rome's government, and this fic puts the perfect spin on it, what with Rome wanting America to be his kind of "warrior queen." And historically, we kind of already know that she fulfills that BUT I WANT TO SEE IT PUT INTO WRITING IN THIS FANFICTION, GODDAMMIT. *blows off steam* God, I want to see this progress further into American history, after the revolution, Ancient Roman history helping shape the American government, the War of 1812, how America reacts to the forced removal of Native American tribes and the belief and pursuit of Manifest Destiny, the Mexican-American War, the Civil War, the Spanish-American War, the huge boom of major American industries and its emergence into a highly-functioning, highly-preforming, sort of economical powerhouse of a nation, WWI, the Great Depression, WWII, the atomic bomb, the Space Race, the Cold War, the Vietnam War, the Korean War, etc, etc, etc... once again, the list goes on and on and on.

I'd absolutely love and adore it if this was to be continued and delve further into American history, exhibiting and showcasing Rome's opinions of it all and how his existence in this story impacts America's development as a character, but sadly enough, judging from the last update date... I'm not so sure that that will ever happen. *sighs*

See what you've done to me, author-chan? In a short span of an hour or so, you've attached me to and made me fall in love with this fanfiction, made me incredibly depressed with the prospect of a lack of updates in the distant future, made me genuinely take my slow, sweet time and savor reading this, (something that doesn't happen that often, I'm a very quick reader.) caused me to hang off your every goddamn word... and I'm rambling. Typical me. Oh well.

If this isn't updated ever again, so be it. In six chapters, you've attached me to this plot with a vengeance and some very sticky sap, (the kind you can never get off your hands) and I get the strong feeling that I'll be returning to this fic a lot in the near future to reread these six chapters. *sighs unhappily* Even so, it would absolutely make my day if you were to update, and if you decide to just leave this fic here, au revior!

Oh by the Gods, this is a masterpiece! In all my years reading Hetalia fanfiction this the first fanfic I came across with a fem America x Ancient Rome pairing! Thus is very very interesting. Continue this story please! Will the other Nations be able to see Rome soon? How will he appear? Will America's attitude be different? Like acting more mature in meetings. Rome and England already taught her etiquette so maybe. Are America and Rome gonna have...Hmmm, sex? I'm also into Percy Jackson, so maybe at a little twist of PJO here? That would be great.

NOW GET THIS STORY GOING OR I'LL SEND YOU TO TARTARUS!

Heh, always want to say that

Oh my gibbly-gosh-darn, I love this story. Please update whenever you get the time!

please write some more. it's good.

Are you still in the hetalia fandom? Please update this, it's too good to be forgotten.
Please don't include male!america in this, it'll be weird and confusing.
Please update this soon!

I really like this story. You write very well. Sadly, I can't find many stories with even interaction between Rome and America. I've also read some of your other Hetalia stories and I've definitely enjoyed them. I have a question, though- are you still in the Hetalia fandom? Even if it's not an update to this wonderful story, I'd like to see more from you. Luckily for me, I'm sort of in the Percy Jackson fandom as well.

I really want to see Rome react to a Grown up America, and with these 6 chapters, thay might not happen. BUT I BELIEVE THAT IT WILL! I love this story, and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Please update this story