Hope to read more soon.

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Comtinue!

Hello,
This is an excellent story. It's very interesting, very detailed, well-written, great grammar, an excellent plot, and you transition between each scene and chapter fluidly. I'm excited to find out what happens next. Keep up the excellent work. I'm looking forward to reading the future chapters of your story. :)

Well that was interesting and I really enjoyed reading this story so far. I really wasn't expecting to like this all that much since it's in the perspective of an original character. I only really gave it a chance under the presumption that Harry will be a primary character in the story. It remains to be seen if that will be the case. I am not sure yet if your plot will follow canon or have AU events, but I hope Harry's character at least develops faster then in canon since otherwise I don't see how he could hope to competently compete on a mental level with Rosalie and Daphne (Something I feel will be mandatory for this story with it's currently perceived direction). Overall though I would have to say that your story can still go in so many different directions that as a reader I am intensely curious to see how you will move ahead. That said I think I made it clear I look forward to your next chapter, please keep up the good work and I hope you have as much fun writing this story as I did reading it.

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon...

Can't wait to read more :)
Continue,
Z.

nice work

An interesting turn meeting of a pissed off Percy and I would assume Blaize. I am really looking for to seeing Harry to see if he's written any different.

Nice backround, not a rushed start, plenty of grounding to expand, characters so depth while expanding on the known FF cannon. A wonderful start to a promissing story, that I hope to read more of soon.

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story.

I don't understand the need for ten chapters of setup. It frustrated me to read through and I doubt I will continue reading based on the pace you set up for a romance story. 22k words in and we haven't even been introduced to the other main character. Its a good idea but there's way too much rambling in it in my opinion. Fuck me though right do what you want to I just won't keep reading. Or hey maybe take criticism and try to improve your writing.

This story is developing very nicely, hope you update soon!

awesome

What a wonderful story, I thank you for sharing your talent. I of course want to know everything that will happen to Rosie (and friends)… right now! I am, however, really enjoying your character development and will remain a loyal reader though out the ups and downs of their time at Hogwarts. I look forward to Harry’s reactions to all of this. I am sure that will… have lots of downs and hopefully a few ups.

Thank again.

great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.