Aw so cute!

This is fantastic :) I love Ethan's willingness to just ignore his own injuries for his team, and the idea that he would regret being off-rotation for any time at all! Thanks for sharing :)

Nice rescue! Great action! Loved how well you described it all. Bravo!

Nice job! Do you have a vendetta against Korea, LOL! Keep writing, as these are really good!

Wow. Nice whump. Love it.

I love your story, but I wonder why Brand dead for 4 minutes 16 seconds. I thought he just have smoking inhalations and some burning. Anyway, I love hurting Brandt. Make us want to take care of him.

That was fabulous!

That was brilliant. I loved the mix of humour, action and heartwarming-ness (which is probably not a word but I feel it's appropriate). You did a really good job with everyone's voices and they all felt completely in character. I also was very impressed with how the bond between them was demonstrated without it feeling too mushy at any point.

There were so many favourite parts it was hard to choose just one but I went with this in the end since it made me giggle out loud, not least because Ethan knew full well what Brandt was 'asking' but let the charade continue;

Brandt does his best to ask how long it took for Ethan to "drag his ass out"by flicking his finger at the clock.

"What did I do?" Benji looks faintly annoyed, and Brandt manages to give a tiny, miniscule shake of his head. Benji once again tries to translate Brandt's repeated movement. "The wall? The doctor? The ugly tiger painting on the wall that looks like it's about to eat you?"

Each time, Brandt manages to give Benji a negative answer.

The team leader looks amused, and Brandt's annoyance is compounded by the fact that he continues to let Benji stumble on and continue their impromptu pantomime game.

You have made me one very very happy Brandt girl! I loved this, every word and every wonderful description. Poor Brandt trying to crawl to safety, Ethan jumping in to save the day and good ol' Benji on hand to rant and rave!

The part with Brandt trying to have a conversation using only his finger was genius! Absolutely loved it.

;] Liked that! Thank you very much!

Yay, Ethan to the rescue! That was awesome! :)

Lots of whump and heroic action, and very well written to match the characters.

I would love to read more of this. Please continue to write. :o)

I do love the non-verbal communication at the end. Love this story! Plenty of action, whump, H/C...it's got it all. Great job!

I love this story. I also love that you're writing in reverse order, 'cause that's just how I roll. I love the whump. I love the little internal quips Brandt about Ethan. I love Benji the Mother Hen to them both. And I'm *going* to love it when you get to that first story and tell us why the hecksters my favorite boy is having nightmares!