| Reviews for The Familiar of Zero: The Right Kind of Familiar |
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   DewElr chapter 6 . 7/25/2019 more please. this is great story |
| Bismarck Alexander chapter 5 . 8/18/2017 Love the lemon. There are too few NON-Louise x Saito lemons for this anime especially if it involves Kirche. Please update. |
| Bismarck Alexander chapter 6 . 6/13/2017 Update soon please. More lemons with Siesta, Henrietta and Jessica. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/30/2016 For this being your favourite anime. You disregarded grammar and knoledhe of said story quite a bit. I'm gone. Btw you need a lot of improvement if this is your favourite story as this story just makes readers cringe at the lack of concern with your own story. By that I mean it looks like you didn't care what you were writing, so then on you have a piece of crap so to say. And I'm saying that lightely the other readers might say otherwise on their part or out of pity just say they enjoy your stories. And yes readers tend to do that in hopes of boosting confidence and getting better writers. I find that never works unless your blunt. |
| Isamaru chapter 6 . 9/14/2014 Nice! Seems like a great story, but is a bit choppy in places, easily fixed with a beta. Anyway, keep up the grest work! |
| Shadowprice chapter 6 . 11/29/2013 this is good you should make more |
| TrueRedDragonGodEmperor chapter 4 . 9/23/2013 Well I can see that he can speak somewhat smoothly. |
| TrueRedDragonGodEmperor chapter 3 . 9/23/2013 I thought this fanfiction would be somewhat different then the light novels but it is basically no different. He still allows himself to be put down by Louis and he is still weak without a weapon. He just adds a couple more insults then he would in the novels. |
| Silber D. Wolf chapter 6 . 4/13/2012 Amazing story and song, I hope that you update soon |
| bubbajack chapter 6 . 3/30/2012 This chap was awesome! But is it just gonna follow the cannon storyline all the way through with no suprises at all? Cause that would be kinda...meh ya know what I mean? |
| bubbajack chapter 5 . 3/30/2012 NICE! I swear only Saito could get away with telling a girl...no I would have had sex with you regardless but the book is just an added bonus." I mean anyone else would've been butchered! Love all the game references! Snake would be proud! |
| bubbajack chapter 4 . 3/30/2012 Nice job once again! I just can't get over how awesome "your Saito" is. I mean he scared Flame and is wooing Lousie! He's like a teenage James Bond almost! |
| bubbajack chapter 3 . 3/30/2012 SWEET! I loved the references and I love this new Saito! He's SO much more badass then canon! |
| bubbajack chapter 2 . 3/30/2012 Nice job! I like your verision of Saito better then the canon one. Keep up the epic work! |
| bubbajack chapter 1 . 3/30/2012 This chap...WAS HILARIOUS! The part where Saito curses god while funny might offend some folks though. Great job all things considered! |
